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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Solid articles on good sources, no copyvio obvious. Sorry, I am not happy with the hook. Is it intentional that we don't get to know that it's a bird? ... that it's a very specific bamboo? "Rice and bamboo", - that's boring, no? I suggest you use the wording from the article, with the hard seeds explaining the name. I'd do it for you but then can't review. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 11:39, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Solid articles on good sources, no copyvio obvious. Sorry, I am not happy with the hook. Is it intentional that we don't get to know that it's a bird? ... that it's a very specific bamboo? "Rice and bamboo", - that's boring, no? I suggest you use the wording from the article, with the hard seeds explaining the name. I'd do it for you but then can't review. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 11:39, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
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::{{ping|Gerda Arendt}} Thanks, Gerda. I think we can challenge the reader to discover what a seedcracker is, so how about:
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:*'''ALT1''' ... that the '''[[lesser seedcracker]]''' enjoys rice and the large, hard seeds of '''[[Olyra latifolia|carrycillo]]'''?
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:*'''ALT2''' ... that the '''[[lesser seedcracker]]''' enjoys rice and the large, hard seeds of the bamboo '''[[Olyra latifolia|carrycillo]]'''? [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 12:42, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
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Revision as of 12:42, 20 July 2019

Lesser seedcracker, Olyra latifolia

5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 06:57, 20 July 2019 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Solid articles on good sources, no copyvio obvious. Sorry, I am not happy with the hook. Is it intentional that we don't get to know that it's a bird? ... that it's a very specific bamboo? "Rice and bamboo", - that's boring, no? I suggest you use the wording from the article, with the hard seeds explaining the name. I'd do it for you but then can't review. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:39, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
Template:Ping Thanks, Gerda. I think we can challenge the reader to discover what a seedcracker is, so how about: