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:::*I also did a few edits on the article, but let me know if it needs more copyediting. Thanks! [[User:001Jrm|001Jrm]] ([[User talk:001Jrm|talk]]) 22:17, 17 May 2015 (UTC) | :::*I also did a few edits on the article, but let me know if it needs more copyediting. Thanks! [[User:001Jrm|001Jrm]] ([[User talk:001Jrm|talk]]) 22:17, 17 May 2015 (UTC) | ||
::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I went ahead and copyedited the page for English grammar and to make the language more encyclopedic. It's not clear to me why you're calling it an "EP" when it's a [[mini album]]. What's left of the ballad/dance tempo idea could yield this hook: | ::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I went ahead and copyedited the page for English grammar and to make the language more encyclopedic. It's not clear to me why you're calling it an "EP" when it's a [[mini album]]. What's left of the ballad/dance tempo idea could yield this hook: | ||
| − | ::::*'''ALT3''': ... that [[Heo Young-saeng]], who usually performs | + | ::::*'''ALT3''': ... that [[Heo Young-saeng]], who usually performs [[ballad]]s as the lead singer of South Korean [[boy band]] [[SS501]], chose a [[Dance music|dance song]] for the title track of his solo debut album, '''''[[Let It Go (EP)|Let It Go]]'''''? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 13:16, 18 June 2015 (UTC) |
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Let It Go (EP)
... that Heo Young-saeng chose dance song "Let It Go" as his title track because many had expected him to choose a ballad song instead for his solo debut album?
5x expanded by 001Jrm (talk). Self-nominated at 01:59, 13 May 2015 (UTC).
- File:Symbol voting keep.svg Hook fact checks out, according to Google Translate. AGF on paraphrasing (a lot of the sources are Korean, a language I can't read). No image to check. Length and age are appropriate. Good to go. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:57, 15 May 2015 (UTC)
- 16px The hook doesn't make sense. What was his motivation? Also, the article needs a light copyedit for encyclopedic grammar. Yoninah (talk) 17:14, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
- I thought that it would be hooky-er if I write it that way.. Anyways, uhmm inserting phrases like "...to challenge himself as a solo artist..." and "...to expand his singing abilities..." would be to obvious and not hooky, I believe? sooo.. how 'bout,
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... that Heo Young-saeng chose dance song "Let It Go" as his title track for his solo debut EP to get away from his usual ballad songs that people already know about? - ALT2:
... that Heo Young-saeng chose dance song "Let It Go" as his title track for his solo debut EP to try out other genres different from his usual ballad songs?
- I also did a few edits on the article, but let me know if it needs more copyediting. Thanks! 001Jrm (talk) 22:17, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
- 16px I went ahead and copyedited the page for English grammar and to make the language more encyclopedic. It's not clear to me why you're calling it an "EP" when it's a mini album. What's left of the ballad/dance tempo idea could yield this hook:
- ALT3: ... that Heo Young-saeng, who usually performs ballads as the lead singer of South Korean boy band SS501, chose a dance song for the title track of his solo debut album, Let It Go? Yoninah (talk) 13:16, 18 June 2015 (UTC)