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Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)

Likelike, engraving by J. Alphonse Pellion
Likelike, engraving by J. Alphonse Pellion
  • ... that Kalanimoku indirectly killed his wife Likelike (pictured) and their son Lanihau with cannon fire outside their house?
    • ALT1:... that Likelike (pictured) and her son died of shock after her husband fired cannons outside their house?
    • ALT2:... that Kalanimoku fired so many cannons to celebrate the birth of his son, that he indirectly killed his wife Likelike (pictured) and their son Lanihau?

Moved to mainspace by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 23:11, 21 November 2016 (UTC).

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  • Comment The phrase "indirectly killed" sounds clunky to me. Perhaps "caused the death of". Edwardx (talk) 01:03, 23 November 2016 (UTC)