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− | * ... that [[Kalanimoku]] | + | * ... that [[Kalanimoku]] caused the death his wife '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)'' and their son Lanihau with cannon fire outside their house? |
** '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)'' and her son died of shock after her [[Kalanimoku|husband]] fired cannons outside their house? | ** '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)'' and her son died of shock after her [[Kalanimoku|husband]] fired cannons outside their house? | ||
** '''ALT2''':... that [[Kalanimoku]] fired so many cannons to celebrate the birth of his son, that he indirectly killed his wife '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)'' and their son Lanihau? | ** '''ALT2''':... that [[Kalanimoku]] fired so many cannons to celebrate the birth of his son, that he indirectly killed his wife '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)'' and their son Lanihau? | ||
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:* '''Comment''' The phrase "indirectly killed" sounds clunky to me. Perhaps "caused the death of". [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 01:03, 23 November 2016 (UTC) | :* '''Comment''' The phrase "indirectly killed" sounds clunky to me. Perhaps "caused the death of". [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 01:03, 23 November 2016 (UTC) | ||
− | + | ::*I went ahead and changed it. I just didn't want to say directly "killed" so "caused the death" works as well. Does it need a second review or is change minuscule enough not to matter? --[[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]] ([[User talk:KAVEBEAR|talk]]) 02:11, 23 November 2016 (UTC) | |
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Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)
- ... that Kalanimoku caused the death his wife Likelike (pictured) and their son Lanihau with cannon fire outside their house?
- ALT1:... that Likelike (pictured) and her son died of shock after her husband fired cannons outside their house?
- ALT2:... that Kalanimoku fired so many cannons to celebrate the birth of his son, that he indirectly killed his wife Likelike (pictured) and their son Lanihau?
Moved to mainspace by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 23:11, 21 November 2016 (UTC).
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