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* <s>... that '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' was forced through injury to stop playing rugby before gaining a full cap, but took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer? </s> <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> | * <s>... that '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' was forced through injury to stop playing rugby before gaining a full cap, but took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer? </s> <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> | ||
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' took part two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer while a Professor of Law, having had to retire from playing top-level rugby twenty earlier?</s> <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> | ** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' took part two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer while a Professor of Law, having had to retire from playing top-level rugby twenty earlier?</s> <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> | ||
− | ** '''ALT2''':... that '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' was forced through injury to stop playing rugby before gaining a full international cap, but 20 years later took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer? <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> | + | ** <s>'''ALT2''':... that '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' was forced through injury to stop playing rugby before gaining a full international cap, but 20 years later took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer?</s> <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> |
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Rachel Rising|Rachel Rising]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Rachel Rising|Rachel Rising]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Drchriswilliams|Drchriswilliams]] ([[User talk:Drchriswilliams|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:26, 21 January 2017 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Drchriswilliams|Drchriswilliams]] ([[User talk:Drchriswilliams|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:26, 21 January 2017 (UTC).</small> | ||
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::::*{{reply to|Dan arndt}} The nomination was submitted shortly after the article was created, I guess there might be some time zone issues affecting how this is displayed. I added references for the unsourced statements in the article. I have struck the first hook and ALT1. I could suggest a few more hooks below that are progressively shorter. [[User:Drchriswilliams|Drchriswilliams]] ([[User talk:Drchriswilliams|talk]]) 14:47, 22 January 2017 (UTC) | ::::*{{reply to|Dan arndt}} The nomination was submitted shortly after the article was created, I guess there might be some time zone issues affecting how this is displayed. I added references for the unsourced statements in the article. I have struck the first hook and ALT1. I could suggest a few more hooks below that are progressively shorter. [[User:Drchriswilliams|Drchriswilliams]] ([[User talk:Drchriswilliams|talk]]) 14:47, 22 January 2017 (UTC) | ||
** '''ALT3''':... that injury stopped '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' from gaining a full international cap as a player, but 20 years later he took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer? <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> | ** '''ALT3''':... that injury stopped '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' from gaining a full international cap as a player, but 20 years later he took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer? <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> | ||
− | ** '''ALT4''':... that after injury, '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' didn't get a full international cap as a player but did later take part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer? <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> | + | ** <s>'''ALT4''':... that after injury, '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' didn't get a full international cap as a player but did later take part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer?</s> <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> |
− | ** '''ALT5''':... that after injury, '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' didn't get a full international cap as a player but took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer? <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> | + | ** <s>'''ALT5''':... that after injury, '''[[Lorne Crerar]]''' didn't get a full international cap as a player but took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer?</s> <small>Source: The Herald ([http://www.heraldscotland.com/news/12444278.Legal_czar_of_many_hats_SATURDAY_INTERVIEW__LORNE_CRERAR_has_been_successful_much_of_his_life_but_regrets_missing_out_on_a_Scottish_rugby_cap__writes_Paul_Rogerson/]) The Scotsman ([http://www.scotsman.com/news/rucks-and-mauls-lorne-crerar-has-all-the-angles-covered-1-1951603])</small> |
I would go with '''ALT3''' as it is the one that is mostly likely to appeal to a broader audience. Thanks for addressing the citation issues. [[User:Dan arndt|Dan arndt]] ([[User talk:Dan arndt|talk]]) 02:43, 23 January 2017 (UTC) | I would go with '''ALT3''' as it is the one that is mostly likely to appeal to a broader audience. Thanks for addressing the citation issues. [[User:Dan arndt|Dan arndt]] ([[User talk:Dan arndt|talk]]) 02:43, 23 January 2017 (UTC) | ||
+ | :*Thanks, I have struck the other suggested hooks. [[User:Drchriswilliams|Drchriswilliams]] ([[User talk:Drchriswilliams|talk]]) 11:24, 23 January 2017 (UTC) | ||
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Lorne Crerar
... that Lorne Crerar was forced through injury to stop playing rugby before gaining a full cap, but took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer?Source: The Herald ([1]) The Scotsman ([2])ALT1:... that Lorne Crerar took part two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer while a Professor of Law, having had to retire from playing top-level rugby twenty earlier?Source: The Herald ([3]) The Scotsman ([4])ALT2:... that Lorne Crerar was forced through injury to stop playing rugby before gaining a full international cap, but 20 years later took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer?Source: The Herald ([5]) The Scotsman ([6])
- Reviewed: Rachel Rising
Created by Drchriswilliams (talk). Self-nominated at 20:26, 21 January 2017 (UTC).
Dan arndt (talk) 23:45, 21 January 2017 (UTC) - though I'm not certain how the DYK was started before the article was created
- Article is newly created (22 January)
- Article is long enough (1,800 characters)
- Article is free of copyright violations
- A couple of the statements in the article need citations.
- All three hooks are short enough.
ALT2 preferred. They could all be trimmed slightly. - Hooks are accurate & properly cited.
- Template:Reply to The nomination was submitted shortly after the article was created, I guess there might be some time zone issues affecting how this is displayed. I added references for the unsourced statements in the article. I have struck the first hook and ALT1. I could suggest a few more hooks below that are progressively shorter. Drchriswilliams (talk) 14:47, 22 January 2017 (UTC)
- ALT3:... that injury stopped Lorne Crerar from gaining a full international cap as a player, but 20 years later he took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer? Source: The Herald ([7]) The Scotsman ([8])
ALT4:... that after injury, Lorne Crerar didn't get a full international cap as a player but did later take part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer?Source: The Herald ([9]) The Scotsman ([10])ALT5:... that after injury, Lorne Crerar didn't get a full international cap as a player but took part in two Rugby World Cups as a judicial officer?Source: The Herald ([11]) The Scotsman ([12])
I would go with ALT3 as it is the one that is mostly likely to appeal to a broader audience. Thanks for addressing the citation issues. Dan arndt (talk) 02:43, 23 January 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks, I have struck the other suggested hooks. Drchriswilliams (talk) 11:24, 23 January 2017 (UTC)