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:::An alternate should be proposed. The directorial debut of Kevin Bacon passes, but I'm not convinced by the Golden Globe. The hook states that the film won an award. According to the article, Helen Mirren won the award for Best Actress in a Miniseries or Television, but the reader could read the hook and confuse it with the award for the best film.  
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:::An alternate should be proposed. The directorial debut of Kevin Bacon passes, but I'm not convinced by the Golden Globe. The hook states that the film won an award. According to the article, Helen Mirren won the award for Best Actress in a Miniseries or Television. The reader could misinterpret the hook, confusing it with the award for the best film.  
 
::*The article was expanded On April 17 on a fivefold and nominated the next day.{{ok}}
 
::*The article was expanded On April 17 on a fivefold and nominated the next day.{{ok}}
 
::*The on-line sources check.{{ok}}
 
::*The on-line sources check.{{ok}}

Revision as of 17:18, 26 April 2013

Losing Chase

Created/expanded by Freikorp (talk). Self nominated at 00:28, 18 April 2013 (UTC).

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An alternate should be proposed. The directorial debut of Kevin Bacon passes, but I'm not convinced by the Golden Globe. The hook states that the film won an award. According to the article, Helen Mirren won the award for Best Actress in a Miniseries or Television. The reader could misinterpret the hook, confusing it with the award for the best film.

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