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{{*mp}}<s>...that Louis Stodder was the [[USS Monitor]]'s turret officer and the first person injured at the [[Battle of Hampton Roads]] surviving a direct hit to ''Monitor''{{'}}s gun turret. ....?</s>
 
{{*mp}}<s>...that Louis Stodder was the [[USS Monitor]]'s turret officer and the first person injured at the [[Battle of Hampton Roads]] surviving a direct hit to ''Monitor''{{'}}s gun turret. ....?</s>
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<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Gwillhickers|Gwillhickers]] ([[User talk:Gwillhickers|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 18:23, 21 July 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Gwillhickers|Gwillhickers]] ([[User talk:Gwillhickers|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 18:23, 21 July 2013 (UTC)</small>.
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Time length and hook all check out, GTG. [[User:Darkness Shines|Darkness Shines]] ([[User talk:Darkness Shines|talk]]) 20:04, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Time length and hook all check out, GTG. [[User:Darkness Shines|Darkness Shines]] ([[User talk:Darkness Shines|talk]]) 20:04, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
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::::*Thanks for taking the time to review. Just want to be clear on something. For purposes of the DYK presentation on the main page I used the full name, Louis Stodder, but the actual sentence (hook) on the ' Stodder page only uses the last name, as the full name is spelled out in the lede. Will this be okay? Again, thanks for your time. -- [[User:Gwillhickers|Gwillhickers]] ([[User talk:Gwillhickers|talk]]) 01:25, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
 
::::*Thanks for taking the time to review. Just want to be clear on something. For purposes of the DYK presentation on the main page I used the full name, Louis Stodder, but the actual sentence (hook) on the ' Stodder page only uses the last name, as the full name is spelled out in the lede. Will this be okay? Again, thanks for your time. -- [[User:Gwillhickers|Gwillhickers]] ([[User talk:Gwillhickers|talk]]) 01:25, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
 
:::::*That's fine. There is no requirement that the hook be a verbatim replica of a statement from the article (in fact, many of the best hooks have different wording from their articles); the key thing is that the factual content of the hook must appear in the article.  
 
:::::*That's fine. There is no requirement that the hook be a verbatim replica of a statement from the article (in fact, many of the best hooks have different wording from their articles); the key thing is that the factual content of the hook must appear in the article.  
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:::::*Note for DYK volunteers: No QPQ is required for this user yet. --[[User:Orlady|Orlady]] ([[User talk:Orlady|talk]]) 01:21, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] I am concerned that this article may include some close paraphrasing. Compare for example "Crockett overcame Stodder's innate modesty he persuade him to give a first-hand account of the birth, short life, and death of that famous ship" with "Mr. Crockett was able to overcome Captain Stodder's innate modsty and persuade him to give the following first-hand account of the birth, short life, and death of that famous ship" [http://brettschulte.net/ACWMagazines/CWTIVol1No9.html here]. [[User:Nikkimaria|Nikkimaria]] ([[User talk:Nikkimaria|talk]]) 01:37, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
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Revision as of 01:37, 31 July 2013

Louis N. Stodder

  • ...that Louis Stodder was the USS Monitor's turret officer and the first person injured at the Battle of Hampton Roads surviving a direct hit to Monitor's gun turret. ....?

Created/expanded by Gwillhickers (talk). Self nominated at 18:23, 21 July 2013 (UTC).

  • Thanks for taking the time to review. Just want to be clear on something. For purposes of the DYK presentation on the main page I used the full name, Louis Stodder, but the actual sentence (hook) on the ' Stodder page only uses the last name, as the full name is spelled out in the lede. Will this be okay? Again, thanks for your time. -- Gwillhickers (talk) 01:25, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
  • That's fine. There is no requirement that the hook be a verbatim replica of a statement from the article (in fact, many of the best hooks have different wording from their articles); the key thing is that the factual content of the hook must appear in the article.
  • Note for DYK volunteers: No QPQ is required for this user yet. --Orlady (talk) 01:21, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg I am concerned that this article may include some close paraphrasing. Compare for example "Crockett overcame Stodder's innate modesty he persuade him to give a first-hand account of the birth, short life, and death of that famous ship" with "Mr. Crockett was able to overcome Captain Stodder's innate modsty and persuade him to give the following first-hand account of the birth, short life, and death of that famous ship" here. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:37, 31 July 2013 (UTC)