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* ... that Dutch chess grandmaster '''[[Lucas van Foreest]]''' is the brother of 2016 [[Dutch Chess Champion]] [[Jorden van Foreest]] and great-great grandson of three-time Dutch Chess Champion [[Arnold van Foreest]]? {{small|Source: Derakhshani, Dorsa (4 January 2017). "Jorden van Foreest on his career so far". Chess24.}}
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*<s> ... that Dutch chess grandmaster '''[[Lucas van Foreest]]''' is the brother of 2016 [[Dutch Chess Champion]] [[Jorden van Foreest]] and great-great grandson of three-time Dutch Chess Champion [[Arnold van Foreest]]?</s> {{small|Source: Derakhshani, Dorsa (4 January 2017). "Jorden van Foreest on his career so far". Chess24.}}
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Hrodvarsson|Hrodvarsson]] ([[User talk:Hrodvarsson|talk]]). Self-nominated at 23:02, 10 October 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Hrodvarsson|Hrodvarsson]] ([[User talk:Hrodvarsson|talk]]). Self-nominated at 23:02, 10 October 2018 (UTC).</small>
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:*'''ALT1''': ... that 17-year-old Dutch chess grandmaster '''[[Lucas van Foreest]]''' has a [[Jorden van Foreest|brother]], [[Arnold van Foreest|great-great grandfather]], and [[Dirk van Foreest|great-great uncle]] who are all [[Dutch Chess Championship|Dutch Chess Champions]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 17:40, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
 
:*'''ALT1''': ... that 17-year-old Dutch chess grandmaster '''[[Lucas van Foreest]]''' has a [[Jorden van Foreest|brother]], [[Arnold van Foreest|great-great grandfather]], and [[Dirk van Foreest|great-great uncle]] who are all [[Dutch Chess Championship|Dutch Chess Champions]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 17:40, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
 
::*{{re|Yoninah}} Thanks for reviewing. I have filled out the references. The ALT hook is more interesting and succinct, I am fine with it. [[User:Hrodvarsson|Hrodvarsson]] ([[User talk:Hrodvarsson|talk]]) 23:55, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
 
::*{{re|Yoninah}} Thanks for reviewing. I have filled out the references. The ALT hook is more interesting and succinct, I am fine with it. [[User:Hrodvarsson|Hrodvarsson]] ([[User talk:Hrodvarsson|talk]]) 23:55, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
 
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:::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]][[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. Foreign-language hook ref for brother AGF; online hook ref for great-great-grandfather and great-great-uncle verified; both cited inline. ALT1 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 00:36, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 00:37, 23 October 2018

Lucas van Foreest

  • Reviewed: Less than five DYK credits.

Created by Hrodvarsson (talk). Self-nominated at 23:02, 10 October 2018 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. Unable to check for close paraphrasing as most sources are foreign-language. Most of the references are pretty bare URLs; please format them using WP:Citation templates. Image is freely licensed. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits.
  • The hook is okay, but I'm wondering if you would mind condensing some of the names for international readers who probably won't recognize them?
  • ALT1: ... that 17-year-old Dutch chess grandmaster Lucas van Foreest has a brother, great-great grandfather, and great-great uncle who are all Dutch Chess Champions? Yoninah (talk) 17:40, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
  • Template:Re Thanks for reviewing. I have filled out the references. The ALT hook is more interesting and succinct, I am fine with it. Hrodvarsson (talk) 23:55, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svgSymbol confirmed.svg Thank you. Foreign-language hook ref for brother AGF; online hook ref for great-great-grandfather and great-great-uncle verified; both cited inline. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 00:36, 23 October 2018 (UTC)