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** '''ALT1''':<s>... that the album '''''[[Luys i Luso]]''''' was released on the centenary of the [[Armenian Genocide]]?</s> <small>Source: [http://asbarez.com/140896/capturing-light-documenting-tigran-hamasyans-luys-i-luso-tour/] and [https://www.theguardian.com/music/2015/oct/08/tigran-hamasyan-luys-i-luso-review]</small> | ** '''ALT1''':<s>... that the album '''''[[Luys i Luso]]''''' was released on the centenary of the [[Armenian Genocide]]?</s> <small>Source: [http://asbarez.com/140896/capturing-light-documenting-tigran-hamasyans-luys-i-luso-tour/] and [https://www.theguardian.com/music/2015/oct/08/tigran-hamasyan-luys-i-luso-review]</small> | ||
** '''ALT2''':<s>... that '''''[[Luys i Luso]]''''' was released to commemorate the centenary of the [[Armenian Genocide]]?</s> <small>Source: [http://asbarez.com/140896/capturing-light-documenting-tigran-hamasyans-luys-i-luso-tour/] and [https://www.theguardian.com/music/2015/oct/08/tigran-hamasyan-luys-i-luso-review]</small> | ** '''ALT2''':<s>... that '''''[[Luys i Luso]]''''' was released to commemorate the centenary of the [[Armenian Genocide]]?</s> <small>Source: [http://asbarez.com/140896/capturing-light-documenting-tigran-hamasyans-luys-i-luso-tour/] and [https://www.theguardian.com/music/2015/oct/08/tigran-hamasyan-luys-i-luso-review]</small> | ||
| − | ** '''ALT3''':... that Armenian pianist [[Tigran Hamasyan]] said that [[God in Christianity|God]] intervened in the recording of his album '''''[[Luys i Luso]]'''''? | + | ** '''ALT3''':<s>... that Armenian pianist [[Tigran Hamasyan]] said that [[God in Christianity|God]] intervened in the recording of his album '''''[[Luys i Luso]]'''''? </s> <small>Source: [https://www.irishtimes.com/culture/music/tigran-hamasyan-coaxes-sacred-sounds-from-the-armenian-darkness-1.2390155]</small> |
** '''ALT4''':... that Armenian pianist [[Tigran Hamasyan]] believes that [[God in Christianity|God]] intervened in the recording of his album '''''[[Luys i Luso]]'''''? <small>Source: [https://www.irishtimes.com/culture/music/tigran-hamasyan-coaxes-sacred-sounds-from-the-armenian-darkness-1.2390155]</small> | ** '''ALT4''':... that Armenian pianist [[Tigran Hamasyan]] believes that [[God in Christianity|God]] intervened in the recording of his album '''''[[Luys i Luso]]'''''? <small>Source: [https://www.irishtimes.com/culture/music/tigran-hamasyan-coaxes-sacred-sounds-from-the-armenian-darkness-1.2390155]</small> | ||
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::::*{{ping|Dreamy Jazz}} thanks for understanding my shorthand. Could you add a mention of his being a pianist, and cite it, in the article? Then we can change "Armenian musician" in the lead to "Armenian pianist", and then the hook refs will be verified. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:26, 2 July 2019 (UTC) | ::::*{{ping|Dreamy Jazz}} thanks for understanding my shorthand. Could you add a mention of his being a pianist, and cite it, in the article? Then we can change "Armenian musician" in the lead to "Armenian pianist", and then the hook refs will be verified. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:26, 2 July 2019 (UTC) | ||
:::::*{{u|Yoninah}}, I've added a sentence in performance which says that he is a pianist and performed the piano in this album. Also changed musician to pianist in the lead. Thanks, [[User:Dreamy Jazz|Dreamy <i style="color:#d01e1e">'''Jazz'''</i>]] 🎷 <sup>''[[User talk:Dreamy Jazz|talk to me]]'' | ''[[Special:Contributions/Dreamy Jazz|my contributions]]''</sup> 21:41, 6 July 2019 (UTC) | :::::*{{u|Yoninah}}, I've added a sentence in performance which says that he is a pianist and performed the piano in this album. Also changed musician to pianist in the lead. Thanks, [[User:Dreamy Jazz|Dreamy <i style="color:#d01e1e">'''Jazz'''</i>]] 🎷 <sup>''[[User talk:Dreamy Jazz|talk to me]]'' | ''[[Special:Contributions/Dreamy Jazz|my contributions]]''</sup> 21:41, 6 July 2019 (UTC) | ||
| + | :::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you very much. Restoring tick for ALT4 per Cwmhiraeth's review. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:57, 6 July 2019 (UTC) | ||
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Luys i Luso
... that Luys i Luso was released on the centenary of the Armenian Genocide?Source: [1] and [2]- ALT1:
... that the album Luys i Luso was released on the centenary of the Armenian Genocide?Source: [3] and [4] - ALT2:
... that Luys i Luso was released to commemorate the centenary of the Armenian Genocide?Source: [5] and [6] - ALT3:
... that Armenian pianist Tigran Hamasyan said that God intervened in the recording of his album Luys i Luso?Source: [7] - ALT4:... that Armenian pianist Tigran Hamasyan believes that God intervened in the recording of his album Luys i Luso? Source: [8]
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Created by Dreamy Jazz (talk). Self-nominated at 18:07, 23 May 2019 (UTC).
- I don't mind adding "the album" before Luys i Luso, but didn't include the variations for clarity's sake. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 18:18, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
- I have also struck the first 3, as I feel the ones about God will get the page more pageviews, as it leaves more details out (and so leaving viewers wanting more). If a reviewer feels that the hooks about God are not good enough, then I will be open to the idea about using the striked ones. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 18:35, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
- I've modified ALTs 3 and 4 to mention a brief description of Hamasyan, because I don't think our predominantly non-Armenian readership (myself included) knows who he is. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:30, 24 May 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 06:16, 24 May 2019 (UTC)
the nomination still needs a proper DYK policy review. Flibirigit (talk) 13:56, 19 June 2019 (UTC)
This interesting article is new enough and long enough. The ALT3 and ALT4 hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright or plagiarism issues. I prefer ALT4. No QPQ needed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:43, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but the article doesn't mention that he is a jazz pianist, and the album isn't jazz. Yoninah (talk) 20:28, 30 June 2019 (UTC)
- Template:U, what about just "pianist"? The source says he is a pianist and seeing that this album isn't really jazz (as you say), it doesn't make sense to say jazz. Those who know who he is will know him primarily as a jazz pianist, but for the uninformed reader this information isn't useful (at least for this album) and would also possibly lead a reader to believe this album is jazz. I'll remove jazz from the hooks. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 16:42, 2 July 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thanks for understanding my shorthand. Could you add a mention of his being a pianist, and cite it, in the article? Then we can change "Armenian musician" in the lead to "Armenian pianist", and then the hook refs will be verified. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:26, 2 July 2019 (UTC)
- Template:U, I've added a sentence in performance which says that he is a pianist and performed the piano in this album. Also changed musician to pianist in the lead. Thanks, Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 21:41, 6 July 2019 (UTC)