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* ... that '''[[Lydia Zvereva]]''' was the first Russian woman to earn a pilot's license?
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* ... that '''[[Lydia Zvereva]]''' ''(pictured)'' was the first Russian woman to earn a pilot's license?
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Disappearance of Tammy Kingery]]
 
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<small>Created by [[User:TheGracefulSlick|TheGracefulSlick]] ([[User talk:TheGracefulSlick|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:15, 15 September 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:TheGracefulSlick|TheGracefulSlick]] ([[User talk:TheGracefulSlick|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:15, 15 September 2017 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] the article is long enough, enough sourced (3 major reliable sources, not many but enough). for my personal taste I would separate the article in more section, but that is related to the article not the hook. no copyvio (2.0%). Article is new (yesterday) and QPQ has been provided. The hook is VERY short... maybe add the fact she died at 26? Just a suggestion: '''ALT1''': that '''[[Lydia Zvereva]]''', who died at 26 years old, was the first Russian woman to earn a pilot's license? [[User:Elisa.rolle|Elisa.rolle]] ([[User talk:Elisa.rolle|talk]]) 20:06, 15 September 2017 (UTC)
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] the article is long enough, enough sourced (3 major reliable sources, not many but enough). for my personal taste I would separate the article in more section, but that is related to the article not the hook. no copyvio (2.0%). Article is new (yesterday) and QPQ has been provided. The hook is VERY short... maybe add the fact she died at 26? Just a suggestion:
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::'''ALT1''': that '''[[Lydia Zvereva]]''' ''(pictured)'', who died at 26 years old, was the first Russian woman to earn a pilot's license? [[User:Elisa.rolle|Elisa.rolle]] ([[User talk:Elisa.rolle|talk]]) 20:06, 15 September 2017 (UTC)
 
::* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote this, but I think it would be much better to use the image, which is public domain:
 
::* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote this, but I think it would be much better to use the image, which is public domain:
 
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::* [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:02, 25 September 2017 (UTC)
 
::* [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:02, 25 September 2017 (UTC)
 
:::* {{u|Yoninah}}, dumb question, would your request just imply that I change the hook to "that Lydia Zvereva (pictured)..."?[[User:TheGracefulSlick|TheGracefulSlick]] ([[User talk:TheGracefulSlick|talk]]) 02:09, 26 September 2017 (UTC)
 
:::* {{u|Yoninah}}, dumb question, would your request just imply that I change the hook to "that Lydia Zvereva (pictured)..."?[[User:TheGracefulSlick|TheGracefulSlick]] ([[User talk:TheGracefulSlick|talk]]) 02:09, 26 September 2017 (UTC)
 
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::::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Added the parenthetical to both hooks. ALT1 also checks out, and is supported by the appropriate inline citations. Image is PD and checks out. --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 03:53, 26 September 2017 (UTC)
 
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Lydia Zvereva

  • ... that Lydia Zvereva (pictured) was the first Russian woman to earn a pilot's license?

Created by TheGracefulSlick (talk). Self-nominated at 19:15, 15 September 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg the article is long enough, enough sourced (3 major reliable sources, not many but enough). for my personal taste I would separate the article in more section, but that is related to the article not the hook. no copyvio (2.0%). Article is new (yesterday) and QPQ has been provided. The hook is VERY short... maybe add the fact she died at 26? Just a suggestion:
ALT1: that Lydia Zvereva (pictured), who died at 26 years old, was the first Russian woman to earn a pilot's license? Elisa.rolle (talk) 20:06, 15 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this, but I think it would be much better to use the image, which is public domain:
Lidiya Zvereva
Lidiya Zvereva
  • Template:U, dumb question, would your request just imply that I change the hook to "that Lydia Zvereva (pictured)..."?TheGracefulSlick (talk) 02:09, 26 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Added the parenthetical to both hooks. ALT1 also checks out, and is supported by the appropriate inline citations. Image is PD and checks out. --Usernameunique (talk) 03:53, 26 September 2017 (UTC)