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::: (Sorry, its hard for me to imagine music studies without singing.) Can we say this?
 
::: (Sorry, its hard for me to imagine music studies without singing.) Can we say this?
 
::: '''ALT1''': ... that [[Herbert Howells]] composed one of 20 settings of '''[[Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)|Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Catredral]]''' ''(choir pictured)'' where he had studied with [[Herbert Brewer]] as a boy? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 23:45, 15 December 2017 (UTC)
 
::: '''ALT1''': ... that [[Herbert Howells]] composed one of 20 settings of '''[[Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)|Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Catredral]]''' ''(choir pictured)'' where he had studied with [[Herbert Brewer]] as a boy? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 23:45, 15 December 2017 (UTC)
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:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, hook is fine, Earwig shows no sign of copyvio - AGF on offline sources, neutral, I would like a source for the "Text" section, but that is not essential. Good to go. [[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]) 22:05, 17 December 2017 (UTC)
 
:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, hook is fine, Earwig shows no sign of copyvio - AGF on offline sources, neutral, I would like a source for the "Text" section, but that is not essential. Good to go. [[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]) 22:05, 17 December 2017 (UTC)
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::::*{{u|Aymatth2}} The hook is not fine – it has an obvious typo and "one of 20" doesn't comply with [[MOS:NUMNOTES]]. Most problematically, it also implies that there are twenty settings of the Mag and Nunc for Gloucester Cathedral. So it needs some rewording
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::::* '''ALT2''': ... that [[Herbert Howells]] composed the '''[[Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)|Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Cathedral]]''' ''(choir pictured)'' after learning the organ there as a boy with [[Herbert Brewer]]?
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::::* How about that? [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 10:57, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
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Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 12:00, 1 December 2017 (UTC).

  • Except that "articled pupil" isn't the same as "chorister", so the hook is factually incorrect. BencherliteTalk 21:54, 14 December 2017 (UTC)
(Sorry, its hard for me to imagine music studies without singing.) Can we say this?
ALT1: ... that Herbert Howells composed one of 20 settings of Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Catredral (choir pictured) where he had studied with Herbert Brewer as a boy? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:45, 15 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg New enough, long enough, hook is fine, Earwig shows no sign of copyvio - AGF on offline sources, neutral, I would like a source for the "Text" section, but that is not essential. Good to go. Aymatth2 (talk) 22:05, 17 December 2017 (UTC)