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:* This ''really'' needs some sort of indication of what this article is about in the hook. I still don't really understand it after reading the lede. The article needs a though our copyedit as well, but that is not a DYK issue. [[User:Maury Markowitz|Maury Markowitz]] ([[User talk:Maury Markowitz|talk]]) 16:18, 28 December 2014 (UTC)
 
:* This ''really'' needs some sort of indication of what this article is about in the hook. I still don't really understand it after reading the lede. The article needs a though our copyedit as well, but that is not a DYK issue. [[User:Maury Markowitz|Maury Markowitz]] ([[User talk:Maury Markowitz|talk]]) 16:18, 28 December 2014 (UTC)
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::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] [[User:Graeme Bartlett|Graeme Bartlett]], this appears to be a significant issue. Please address it as soon as possible; it's been eleven days without a response. Also, if the article needs a thorough copyedit, it is a DYK issue despite what Maury said: I just read the lede and it is incomprehensible, and as such has no business being linked to on the main page. Thank you. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 15:37, 8 January 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 15:37, 8 January 2015

Main Central Thrust

Created/expanded by Hongcheng Guo (talk). Nominated by Graeme Bartlett (talk) at 19:42, 17 November 2014 (UTC).

  • This really needs some sort of indication of what this article is about in the hook. I still don't really understand it after reading the lede. The article needs a though our copyedit as well, but that is not a DYK issue. Maury Markowitz (talk) 16:18, 28 December 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Graeme Bartlett, this appears to be a significant issue. Please address it as soon as possible; it's been eleven days without a response. Also, if the article needs a thorough copyedit, it is a DYK issue despite what Maury said: I just read the lede and it is incomprehensible, and as such has no business being linked to on the main page. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:37, 8 January 2015 (UTC)