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* ... that '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' was inspired to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]] by [[Ikue Ōtani]], the voice actress of [[Pikachu]]? <small>Source: [https://ddnavi.com/interview/191491/] "『ポケットモンスター』のピカチュウと『ワンピース』のチョッパーの声が同じ人(大谷さん)だと知ったとき、声優さんすごいなぁ~と思い、意識し始めました。私も子どもながらに漠然と「この人になりたい!」って思いましたね。 "</small> | * ... that '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' was inspired to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]] by [[Ikue Ōtani]], the voice actress of [[Pikachu]]? <small>Source: [https://ddnavi.com/interview/191491/] "『ポケットモンスター』のピカチュウと『ワンピース』のチョッパーの声が同じ人(大谷さん)だと知ったとき、声優さんすごいなぁ~と思い、意識し始めました。私も子どもながらに漠然と「この人になりたい!」って思いましたね。 "</small> | ||
| − | ** '''ALT1''':... that [[Ikue Ōtani]]'s vocal performances as Chopper from ''[[One Piece]]'' and as [[Pikachu]] helped inspire '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]]? <small>Source: same as ALT0</small> | + | ** '''ALT1''':<s>... that [[Ikue Ōtani]]'s vocal performances as Chopper from ''[[One Piece]]'' and as [[Pikachu]] helped inspire '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]]? <small>Source: same as ALT0</small></s> |
| − | ** '''ALT2''':... that [[Ikue Ōtani]]'s vocal performances as [[Pikachu]] helped inspire '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]]? | + | ** '''ALT2''':<s>... that [[Ikue Ōtani]]'s vocal performances as [[Pikachu]] helped inspire '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]]?</s> |
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Class of 2018]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Class of 2018]] | ||
:* ''Comment'': Requesting that this goes up on Kouno's birthday on February 22. | :* ''Comment'': Requesting that this goes up on Kouno's birthday on February 22. | ||
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| − | :* | + | : [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Solid facts on good sources, Japanese sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The article is safely long enough, so I suggest a bit of trimming, - no prerequisite for a pass, just suggestions: |
| + | :* "she was fond of reading, and she liked to read aloud", besides that the info is not tremendously interesting - you may loose your readers - it's repetitious. | ||
| + | :* "She first became interested" - and second? | ||
| + | :* Do we have a year for the "aspiring"? | ||
| + | :* I'd drop all these "would", - she did it, or not? | ||
| + | :* "She also participated in other activities such as playing basketball." - "She also played basketball."?? | ||
| + | :* "After her graduation, she enrolled in a training school to hone her skills." - what else do you enter a training school for than to hone your skills? | ||
| + | :* No need to repeat training school the next sentence. | ||
| + | :* I'd like links for "music unit" and "idoö unit" - no idea what that means, unfamiliar with the topic, - or is it written only for those who know? | ||
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| + | : Same in the hook: can you avoid the repetition of "voice actress"? For example "who voiced Pikachu"? I prefer the original hook structure, where the topic is upfront. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 20:45, 17 January 2019 (UTC) | ||
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Marika Kouno
- ... that Marika Kouno was inspired to pursue a career in voice acting by Ikue Ōtani, the voice actress of Pikachu? Source: [1] "『ポケットモンスター』のピカチュウと『ワンピース』のチョッパーの声が同じ人(大谷さん)だと知ったとき、声優さんすごいなぁ~と思い、意識し始めました。私も子どもながらに漠然と「この人になりたい!」って思いましたね。 "
- ALT1:
... that Ikue Ōtani's vocal performances as Chopper from One Piece and as Pikachu helped inspire Marika Kouno to pursue a career in voice acting? Source: same as ALT0 - ALT2:
... that Ikue Ōtani's vocal performances as Pikachu helped inspire Marika Kouno to pursue a career in voice acting?
- ALT1:
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Class of 2018
- Comment: Requesting that this goes up on Kouno's birthday on February 22.
5x expanded by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:13, 15 January 2019 (UTC).
Solid facts on good sources, Japanese sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The article is safely long enough, so I suggest a bit of trimming, - no prerequisite for a pass, just suggestions:
- "she was fond of reading, and she liked to read aloud", besides that the info is not tremendously interesting - you may loose your readers - it's repetitious.
- "She first became interested" - and second?
- Do we have a year for the "aspiring"?
- I'd drop all these "would", - she did it, or not?
- "She also participated in other activities such as playing basketball." - "She also played basketball."??
- "After her graduation, she enrolled in a training school to hone her skills." - what else do you enter a training school for than to hone your skills?
- No need to repeat training school the next sentence.
- I'd like links for "music unit" and "idoö unit" - no idea what that means, unfamiliar with the topic, - or is it written only for those who know?
- Same in the hook: can you avoid the repetition of "voice actress"? For example "who voiced Pikachu"? I prefer the original hook structure, where the topic is upfront. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:45, 17 January 2019 (UTC)