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* ... that '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' was inspired to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]] by [[Ikue Ōtani]], the voice actress of [[Pikachu]]?  <small>Source: [https://ddnavi.com/interview/191491/] "『ポケットモンスター』のピカチュウと『ワンピース』のチョッパーの声が同じ人(大谷さん)だと知ったとき、声優さんすごいなぁ~と思い、意識し始めました。私も子どもながらに漠然と「この人になりたい!」って思いましたね。 "</small>
 
* ... that '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' was inspired to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]] by [[Ikue Ōtani]], the voice actress of [[Pikachu]]?  <small>Source: [https://ddnavi.com/interview/191491/] "『ポケットモンスター』のピカチュウと『ワンピース』のチョッパーの声が同じ人(大谷さん)だと知ったとき、声優さんすごいなぁ~と思い、意識し始めました。私も子どもながらに漠然と「この人になりたい!」って思いましたね。 "</small>
** '''ALT1''':... that [[Ikue Ōtani]]'s vocal performances as Chopper from ''[[One Piece]]'' and as [[Pikachu]] helped inspire '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]]?  <small>Source: same as ALT0</small>
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** '''ALT1''':<s>... that [[Ikue Ōtani]]'s vocal performances as Chopper from ''[[One Piece]]'' and as [[Pikachu]] helped inspire '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]]?  <small>Source: same as ALT0</small></s>
** '''ALT2''':... that [[Ikue Ōtani]]'s vocal performances as [[Pikachu]] helped inspire '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]]?
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** '''ALT2''':<s>... that [[Ikue Ōtani]]'s vocal performances as [[Pikachu]] helped inspire '''[[Marika Kouno]]''' to pursue a career in [[Voice acting in Japan|voice acting]]?</s>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Class of 2018]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Class of 2018]]
 
:* ''Comment'': Requesting that this goes up on Kouno's birthday on February 22.
 
:* ''Comment'': Requesting that this goes up on Kouno's birthday on February 22.
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Solid facts on good sources, Japanese sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The article is safely long enough, so I suggest a bit of trimming, - no prerequisite for a pass, just suggestions:
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:* "she was fond of reading, and she liked to read aloud", besides that the info is not tremendously interesting - you may loose your readers - it's repetitious.
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:* "She first became interested" - and second?
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:* Do we have a year for the "aspiring"?
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:* I'd drop all these "would", - she did it, or not?
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:* "She also participated in other activities such as playing basketball." - "She also played basketball."??
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:* "After her graduation, she enrolled in a training school to hone her skills." - what else do you enter a training school for than to hone your skills?
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:* No need to repeat training school the next sentence.
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:* I'd like links for "music unit" and "idoö unit" - no idea what that means, unfamiliar with the topic, - or is it written only for those who know?
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: Same in the hook: can you avoid the repetition of "voice actress"? For example "who voiced Pikachu"? I prefer the original hook structure, where the topic is upfront. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 20:45, 17 January 2019 (UTC) 
  
 
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Revision as of 20:45, 17 January 2019

Marika Kouno

  • ... that Marika Kouno was inspired to pursue a career in voice acting by Ikue Ōtani, the voice actress of Pikachu? Source: [1] "『ポケットモンスター』のピカチュウと『ワンピース』のチョッパーの声が同じ人(大谷さん)だと知ったとき、声優さんすごいなぁ~と思い、意識し始めました。私も子どもながらに漠然と「この人になりたい!」って思いましたね。 "

5x expanded by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:13, 15 January 2019 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Solid facts on good sources, Japanese sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The article is safely long enough, so I suggest a bit of trimming, - no prerequisite for a pass, just suggestions:
  • "she was fond of reading, and she liked to read aloud", besides that the info is not tremendously interesting - you may loose your readers - it's repetitious.
  • "She first became interested" - and second?
  • Do we have a year for the "aspiring"?
  • I'd drop all these "would", - she did it, or not?
  • "She also participated in other activities such as playing basketball." - "She also played basketball."??
  • "After her graduation, she enrolled in a training school to hone her skills." - what else do you enter a training school for than to hone your skills?
  • No need to repeat training school the next sentence.
  • I'd like links for "music unit" and "idoö unit" - no idea what that means, unfamiliar with the topic, - or is it written only for those who know?
Same in the hook: can you avoid the repetition of "voice actress"? For example "who voiced Pikachu"? I prefer the original hook structure, where the topic is upfront. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:45, 17 January 2019 (UTC)