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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  New reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook and also those criteria not mentioned in the original review: newness, copyvio/close paraphrasing, neutrality, hook sourcing, etc. Thanks. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 21:23, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  New reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook and also those criteria not mentioned in the original review: newness, copyvio/close paraphrasing, neutrality, hook sourcing, etc. Thanks. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 21:23, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Working on completing this review so it can be passed, but just can't get over how incredibly dull the two hooks are! I think it's interesting that she studied abroad on a scholarship though, and could also be a hook, e.g. the captain of the Northern Ireland women's national football team studied in the USA on a football scholarship. I had no idea foreign students could be given sports scholarships...!! {{ping|The C of E}} if you craft a new hook I'll finish the review. [[User:Julia W|<b><font color="#4B0082">Julia</font></b>]]\<sup>[[User_talk:Julia W|<font color="#008080">talk</font>]]</sup> 13:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 13:06, 11 December 2017

Marissa Callaghan

Created by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 10:31, 4 November 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The article is well written and well cited, however I have concern that the proposed hook will not be interesting to a broad audience. Otherwise, great article! – PhilipTerryGraham (talk · contribs · count) 08:48, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg New reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook and also those criteria not mentioned in the original review: newness, copyvio/close paraphrasing, neutrality, hook sourcing, etc. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:23, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
  • File:Symbol question.svg Working on completing this review so it can be passed, but just can't get over how incredibly dull the two hooks are! I think it's interesting that she studied abroad on a scholarship though, and could also be a hook, e.g. the captain of the Northern Ireland women's national football team studied in the USA on a football scholarship. I had no idea foreign students could be given sports scholarships...!! Template:Ping if you craft a new hook I'll finish the review. Julia\talk 13:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC)