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*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Working on completing this review so it can be passed, but just can't get over how incredibly dull the two hooks are! I think it's interesting that she studied abroad on a scholarship though, and could also be a hook, e.g. the captain of the Northern Ireland women's national football team studied in the USA on a football scholarship. I had no idea foreign students could be given sports scholarships...!! {{ping|The C of E}} if you craft a new hook I'll finish the review. [[User:Julia W|<b><font color="#4B0082">Julia</font></b>]]\<sup>[[User_talk:Julia W|<font color="#008080">talk</font>]]</sup> 13:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC) | *[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Working on completing this review so it can be passed, but just can't get over how incredibly dull the two hooks are! I think it's interesting that she studied abroad on a scholarship though, and could also be a hook, e.g. the captain of the Northern Ireland women's national football team studied in the USA on a football scholarship. I had no idea foreign students could be given sports scholarships...!! {{ping|The C of E}} if you craft a new hook I'll finish the review. [[User:Julia W|<b><font color="#4B0082">Julia</font></b>]]\<sup>[[User_talk:Julia W|<font color="#008080">talk</font>]]</sup> 13:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | **'''ALT2''' ... that the Northern Ireland national football team captain '''[[Marissa Callaghan]]''' went to university in the United States on a football scholarship? {{ping|Julia W}}. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<font color="red">The C of E </font><font color="blue"> God Save the Queen!</font>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<font color="darkblue">talk</font>]])</span> 13:12, 11 December 2017 (UTC) | |
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Marissa Callaghan
- ... that the Northern Ireland national football captain Marissa Callaghan is academy director at her club? Source: Belfast Live
- Reviewed: Olive Scott
Created by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 10:31, 4 November 2017 (UTC).
The article is well written and well cited, however I have concern that the proposed hook will not be interesting to a broad audience. Otherwise, great article! – PhilipTerryGraham (talk · contribs · count) 08:48, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that the Northern Ireland national football captain Marissa Callaghan is also an Irish Football Association ambassador? Template:Ping. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 23:36, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
New reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook and also those criteria not mentioned in the original review: newness, copyvio/close paraphrasing, neutrality, hook sourcing, etc. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:23, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
Working on completing this review so it can be passed, but just can't get over how incredibly dull the two hooks are! I think it's interesting that she studied abroad on a scholarship though, and could also be a hook, e.g. the captain of the Northern Ireland women's national football team studied in the USA on a football scholarship. I had no idea foreign students could be given sports scholarships...!! Template:Ping if you craft a new hook I'll finish the review. Julia\talk 13:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that the Northern Ireland national football team captain Marissa Callaghan went to university in the United States on a football scholarship? Template:Ping. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 13:12, 11 December 2017 (UTC)