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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is well written and well cited, however I have concern that the proposed hook will not be interesting to a broad audience. Otherwise, great article! – [[User:PhilipTerryGraham|PhilipTerryGraham]] <span class="plainlinks">([[User talk:PhilipTerryGraham|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contribs/PhilipTerryGraham|contribs]] '''·''' [//tools.wmflabs.org/xtools-ec/?user=PhilipTerryGraham&project=en.wikipedia.org count])</span> 08:48, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is well written and well cited, however I have concern that the proposed hook will not be interesting to a broad audience. Otherwise, great article! – [[User:PhilipTerryGraham|PhilipTerryGraham]] <span class="plainlinks">([[User talk:PhilipTerryGraham|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contribs/PhilipTerryGraham|contribs]] '''·''' [//tools.wmflabs.org/xtools-ec/?user=PhilipTerryGraham&project=en.wikipedia.org count])</span> 08:48, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
::*'''ALT1''' ... that the Northern Ireland national football captain '''[[Marissa Callaghan]]''' is also an Irish Football Association ambassador? {{ping|PhilipTerryGraham}}. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<font color="red">The C of E  </font><font color="blue"> God Save the Queen!</font>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<font color="darkblue">talk</font>]])</span> 23:36, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
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::*'''ALT1''' ... that the Northern Ireland national football captain '''[[Marissa Callaghan]]''' is also an Irish Football Association ambassador? {{ping|PhilipTerryGraham}}. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<span style="color:red;">The C of E  </span><span style="color:blue;"> God Save the Queen!</span>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<span style="color:darkblue;">talk</span>]])</span> 23:36, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
  
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  New reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook and also those criteria not mentioned in the original review: newness, copyvio/close paraphrasing, neutrality, hook sourcing, etc. Thanks. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 21:23, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  New reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook and also those criteria not mentioned in the original review: newness, copyvio/close paraphrasing, neutrality, hook sourcing, etc. Thanks. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 21:23, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
  
*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Working on completing this review so it can be passed, but just can't get over how incredibly dull the two hooks are! I think it's interesting that she studied abroad on a scholarship though, and could also be a hook, e.g. the captain of the Northern Ireland women's national football team studied in the USA on a football scholarship. I had no idea foreign students could be given sports scholarships...!! {{ping|The C of E}} if you craft a new hook I'll finish the review. [[User:Julia W|<b><font color="#4B0082">Julia</font></b>]]\<sup>[[User_talk:Julia W|<font color="#008080">talk</font>]]</sup> 13:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Working on completing this review so it can be passed, but just can't get over how incredibly dull the two hooks are! I think it's interesting that she studied abroad on a scholarship though, and could also be a hook, e.g. the captain of the Northern Ireland women's national football team studied in the USA on a football scholarship. I had no idea foreign students could be given sports scholarships...!! {{ping|The C of E}} if you craft a new hook I'll finish the review. [[User:Julia W|<b><span style="color:#4B0082;">Julia</span></b>]]\<sup>[[User_talk:Julia W|<span style="color:#008080;">talk</span>]]</sup> 13:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
**'''ALT2''' ... that the [[Northern Ireland women's national football team]] captain '''[[Marissa Callaghan]]''' went to university in the United States on a [[athletic scholarship|football scholarship]]? <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<font color="red">The C of E  </font><font color="blue"> God Save the Queen!</font>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<font color="darkblue">talk</font>]])</span> 13:12, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
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**'''ALT2''' ... that the [[Northern Ireland women's national football team]] captain '''[[Marissa Callaghan]]''' went to university in the United States on a [[athletic scholarship|football scholarship]]? <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<span style="color:red;">The C of E  </span><span style="color:blue;"> God Save the Queen!</span>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<span style="color:darkblue;">talk</span>]])</span> 13:12, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] '''ALT2''' is ready for DYK. Article nominated same day as creation, and has now been checked for copyvio/close paraphrasing & size, is neutral, and hook source is fine. [[User:Julia W|<b><font color="#4B0082">Julia</font></b>]]\<sup>[[User_talk:Julia W|<font color="#008080">talk</font>]]</sup> 16:32, 11 December 2017 (UTC)</div></noinclude>
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*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] '''ALT2''' is ready for DYK. Article nominated same day as creation, and has now been checked for copyvio/close paraphrasing & size, is neutral, and hook source is fine. [[User:Julia W|<b><span style="color:#4B0082;">Julia</span></b>]]\<sup>[[User_talk:Julia W|<span style="color:#008080;">talk</span>]]</sup> 16:32, 11 December 2017 (UTC)</div></noinclude>
 
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Latest revision as of 22:45, 30 March 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:22, 11 December 2017 (UTC)

Marissa Callaghan

Created by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 10:31, 4 November 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The article is well written and well cited, however I have concern that the proposed hook will not be interesting to a broad audience. Otherwise, great article! – PhilipTerryGraham (talk · contribs · count) 08:48, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg New reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook and also those criteria not mentioned in the original review: newness, copyvio/close paraphrasing, neutrality, hook sourcing, etc. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:23, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Working on completing this review so it can be passed, but just can't get over how incredibly dull the two hooks are! I think it's interesting that she studied abroad on a scholarship though, and could also be a hook, e.g. the captain of the Northern Ireland women's national football team studied in the USA on a football scholarship. I had no idea foreign students could be given sports scholarships...!! Template:Ping if you craft a new hook I'll finish the review. Julia\talk 13:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg ALT2 is ready for DYK. Article nominated same day as creation, and has now been checked for copyvio/close paraphrasing & size, is neutral, and hook source is fine. Julia\talk 16:32, 11 December 2017 (UTC)