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(changing "involving" to "for" as reading this now, involving implied that all three would have been in one One Shot.)
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:::::I think changing the main one to "involving Loki..." would work. - [[User:Favre1fan93|Favre1fan93]] ([[User talk:Favre1fan93|talk]]) 03:52, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
 
:::::I think changing the main one to "involving Loki..." would work. - [[User:Favre1fan93|Favre1fan93]] ([[User talk:Favre1fan93|talk]]) 03:52, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
 
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[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Passed! The final hook (per [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk%3AFavre1fan93&diff=617176524&oldid=617172766 this diff] on Favre1fan93's talk page) is: "...that [[Marvel Studios]] considered making stand-alone short films—known as '''[[Marvel One-Shots]]'''—involving [[Loki (comics)|Loki]], [[Black Panther (comics)|Black Panther]], and [[Damage Control (comics)|Damage Control]]?" '''[[User:Corvoe|<span style="color:#FF00FF">Corvoe</span>]]''' [[User talk:Corvoe|<span style="color:#FF00FF">(speak to me)]]</span> 13:35, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
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[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Passed! The final hook (per [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk%3AFavre1fan93&diff=617176524&oldid=617172766 this diff] on Favre1fan93's talk page) is: "...that [[Marvel Studios]] considered making stand-alone short films—known as '''[[Marvel One-Shots]]'''—for [[Loki (comics)|Loki]], [[Black Panther (comics)|Black Panther]], and [[Damage Control (comics)|Damage Control]]?" '''[[User:Corvoe|<span style="color:#FF00FF">Corvoe</span>]]''' [[User talk:Corvoe|<span style="color:#FF00FF">(speak to me)]]</span> 13:35, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
 
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:Changed one word in the final hook for more clarity. - [[User:Favre1fan93|Favre1fan93]] ([[User talk:Favre1fan93|talk]]) 13:57, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 13:57, 16 July 2014

Marvel One-Shots

Improved to Good Article status by Favre1fan93 (talk), TriiipleThreat (talk). Nominated by Favre1fan93 (talk) at 03:14, 9 July 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Long enough, "new" enough (just promoted to GA), no copyvio or plagiarism concerns, information is all sourced well. I would say ALT2 is the best hook, but I would recommend a small change:
"...that Marvel One-Shots, a series of short films produced by Marvel Studios, inspired two television series?"
If you disagree with that change, I'll still pass it all the same. ALT2 sounds fine as it is, just a bit of a brevity rewrite. Corvoe (speak to me) 15:17, 14 July 2014 (UTC)
I would be fine with your wording change, but Triiiple and I were both partial to the main one, as it covered an established character in the MCU, and two unknowns, with Damage Control being an oddball/intriguing short of the two. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 01:49, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
Template:Ping I see where you're coming from, I think it's interesting too. The main issue I take with that is that Loki and Black Panther being described as "properties" feels very off. I actually really liked the Damage Control name drop, but it feels clunky. Maybe "...known as Marvel One-Shots, that involved/involving Loki, Black Panther, and Damage Control" or something similar? Corvoe (speak to me) 02:42, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
I think changing the main one to "involving Loki..." would work. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 03:52, 15 July 2014 (UTC)

Template:Od Symbol confirmed.svg Passed! The final hook (per this diff on Favre1fan93's talk page) is: "...that Marvel Studios considered making stand-alone short films—known as Marvel One-Shots—for Loki, Black Panther, and Damage Control?" Corvoe (speak to me) 13:35, 16 July 2014 (UTC)

Changed one word in the final hook for more clarity. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 13:57, 16 July 2014 (UTC)