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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Hook may need some tweaking. I found this ''she was the first woman to serve as superintendent of an Australian hospital'' interesting and think it would be nice to incorporate it in. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 15:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Hook may need some tweaking. I found this ''she was the first woman to serve as superintendent of an Australian hospital'' interesting and think it would be nice to incorporate it in. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 15:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|Crosstemplejay}} There have been a lot of "first woman" hooks recently which are a bit repetitive, so I thought the proposed hook was an interesting possibility. But I've added your suggestion as an alternative hook, and perhaps the promoter can choose between them. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 09:44, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|Crosstemplejay}} There have been a lot of "first woman" hooks recently which are a bit repetitive, so I thought the proposed hook was an interesting possibility. But I've added your suggestion as an alternative hook, and perhaps the promoter can choose between them. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 09:44, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
:* '''ALT2''': ... that '''[[Mary Puckey]]''' served as general superintendent of Sydney's [[Rachel Forster Hospital]] for 22 and was award the an [[MBE]] after her retirement? <small>Source: [http://ro.uow.edu.au/ihsbulletin/921/]</small>
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:* '''ALT2''': ... that '''[[Mary Puckey]]''' served as general superintendent of Sydney's [[Rachel Forster Hospital]] for 22 years and was award an [[MBE]] after her retirement? <small>Source: [http://ro.uow.edu.au/ihsbulletin/921/]</small>
 
::*{{ping|97198}} I have suggested a new hook. A new reviewer will be needed. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 11:15, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|97198}} I have suggested a new hook. A new reviewer will be needed. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 11:15, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
 
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Mary Puckey

  • ALT1: ... that Mary Puckey was the first female superintendent of an Australian hospital?
  • Reviewed: Zafirlukast

Created by 97198 (talk). Self-nominated at 11:53, 18 December 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Hook may need some tweaking. I found this she was the first woman to serve as superintendent of an Australian hospital interesting and think it would be nice to incorporate it in. CrossTemple Jay 15:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping There have been a lot of "first woman" hooks recently which are a bit repetitive, so I thought the proposed hook was an interesting possibility. But I've added your suggestion as an alternative hook, and perhaps the promoter can choose between them. 97198 (talk) 09:44, 19 December 2017 (UTC)