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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Hook may need some tweaking. I found this ''she was the first woman to serve as superintendent of an Australian hospital'' interesting and think it would be nice to incorporate it in. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 15:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Hook may need some tweaking. I found this ''she was the first woman to serve as superintendent of an Australian hospital'' interesting and think it would be nice to incorporate it in. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 15:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | ||
::*{{ping|Crosstemplejay}} There have been a lot of "first woman" hooks recently which are a bit repetitive, so I thought the proposed hook was an interesting possibility. But I've added your suggestion as an alternative hook, and perhaps the promoter can choose between them. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 09:44, 19 December 2017 (UTC) | ::*{{ping|Crosstemplejay}} There have been a lot of "first woman" hooks recently which are a bit repetitive, so I thought the proposed hook was an interesting possibility. But I've added your suggestion as an alternative hook, and perhaps the promoter can choose between them. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 09:44, 19 December 2017 (UTC) | ||
| − | :* '''ALT2''': ... that '''[[Mary Puckey]]''' served as general superintendent of Sydney's [[Rachel Forster Hospital]] for 22 years and was award an [[MBE]] after her retirement? <small>Source: [http://ro.uow.edu.au/ihsbulletin/921/]</small> | + | :* '''ALT2''': ... that '''[[Mary Puckey]]''' served as general superintendent of Sydney's [[Rachel Forster Hospital]] for 22 years and was award an [[Member of the Most Excellent Order of the British Empire|MBE]] after her retirement? <small>Source: [http://ro.uow.edu.au/ihsbulletin/921/]</small> |
::*{{ping|97198}} I have suggested a new hook. A new reviewer will be needed. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 11:15, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | ::*{{ping|97198}} I have suggested a new hook. A new reviewer will be needed. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 11:15, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | ||
:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] New reviewer requested to look at any of the proposed hooks. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 11:29, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] New reviewer requested to look at any of the proposed hooks. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 11:29, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | ||
::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Approving all three hooks, which check out with inline citations. Preference to ALT0 (an actual accomplishment, rather than job titles/awards), but up to the promoter to decide. --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 09:00, 22 December 2017 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | ::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Approving all three hooks, which check out with inline citations. Preference to ALT0 (an actual accomplishment, rather than job titles/awards), but up to the promoter to decide. --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 09:00, 22 December 2017 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | ||
Revision as of 05:28, 1 May 2020
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:46, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
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Mary Puckey
- ... that under the leadership of Mary Puckey, Sydney's Rachel Forster Hospital expanded from 12 to 120 beds? Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that Mary Puckey was the first female superintendent of an Australian hospital?
- Reviewed: Zafirlukast
Created by 97198 (talk). Self-nominated at 11:53, 18 December 2017 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Hook may need some tweaking. I found this she was the first woman to serve as superintendent of an Australian hospital interesting and think it would be nice to incorporate it in. CrossTemple Jay 15:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping There have been a lot of "first woman" hooks recently which are a bit repetitive, so I thought the proposed hook was an interesting possibility. But I've added your suggestion as an alternative hook, and perhaps the promoter can choose between them. 97198 (talk) 09:44, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that Mary Puckey served as general superintendent of Sydney's Rachel Forster Hospital for 22 years and was award an MBE after her retirement? Source: [2]
- Template:Ping I have suggested a new hook. A new reviewer will be needed. CrossTemple Jay 11:15, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
New reviewer requested to look at any of the proposed hooks. 97198 (talk) 11:29, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
Approving all three hooks, which check out with inline citations. Preference to ALT0 (an actual accomplishment, rather than job titles/awards), but up to the promoter to decide. --Usernameunique (talk) 09:00, 22 December 2017 (UTC)