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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] The article looks good at present, but I have a few issues with the hook. There should be links to [[Tampa Bay Buccaneers]], [[Temple Owls football]], [[running back]] and possibly [[National Football League]]. I would also suggest rewording it to something like: "... that, despite [[Temple Owls football|Temple]] [[running back]] '''[[Matt Brown (American football)|Matt Brown]]''' only being 5 feet 5 inches tall, the [[Tampa Bay Buccaneers]] just signed him to a three-year NFL contract?" Hope this helps. – [[User:PeeJay2K3|Pee]][[User talk:PeeJay2K3|Jay]] 13:28, 2 June 2013 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] The article looks good at present, but I have a few issues with the hook. There should be links to [[Tampa Bay Buccaneers]], [[Temple Owls football]], [[running back]] and possibly [[National Football League]]. I would also suggest rewording it to something like: "... that, despite [[Temple Owls football|Temple]] [[running back]] '''[[Matt Brown (American football)|Matt Brown]]''' only being 5 feet 5 inches tall, the [[Tampa Bay Buccaneers]] just signed him to a three-year NFL contract?" Hope this helps. – [[User:PeeJay2K3|Pee]][[User talk:PeeJay2K3|Jay]] 13:28, 2 June 2013 (UTC) | ||
| − | ::* | + | ::* Sorry about the links, I misread some of the rules about what could be and could not be linked in a DYK. The new hook is better. Changes finished, thanks for the input.«[[User:Marylandstater|<font color="#B22222">'''''Maryland'''''</font><font color="#3B444B">'''''stater'''''</font>]]» <sup>«</sup>[[User talk:Marylandstater|<font color="#B22222">''<sup>reply</sup>''</font>]]<sup>»</sup> 00:58, 3 June 2013 (UTC) |
:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Looks good now! I still might suggest adding a link to [[National Football League]], but even without it, you have my support. – [[User:PeeJay2K3|Pee]][[User talk:PeeJay2K3|Jay]] 01:11, 3 June 2013 (UTC)<br />Done.«[[User:Marylandstater|<font color="#B22222">'''''Maryland'''''</font><font color="#3B444B">'''''stater'''''</font>]]» <sup>«</sup>[[User talk:Marylandstater|<font color="#B22222">''<sup>reply</sup>''</font>]]<sup>»</sup> 02:48, 3 June 2013 (UTC) | :::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Looks good now! I still might suggest adding a link to [[National Football League]], but even without it, you have my support. – [[User:PeeJay2K3|Pee]][[User talk:PeeJay2K3|Jay]] 01:11, 3 June 2013 (UTC)<br />Done.«[[User:Marylandstater|<font color="#B22222">'''''Maryland'''''</font><font color="#3B444B">'''''stater'''''</font>]]» <sup>«</sup>[[User talk:Marylandstater|<font color="#B22222">''<sup>reply</sup>''</font>]]<sup>»</sup> 02:48, 3 June 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Matt Brown (American football)
- ... that, despite Temple running back Matt Brown only being 5 feet 5 inches tall, the Tampa Bay Buccaneers just signed him to a three-year NFL contract?"
Created by Marylandstater (talk). Self nominated at 14:55, 31 May 2013 (UTC).
The article looks good at present, but I have a few issues with the hook. There should be links to Tampa Bay Buccaneers, Temple Owls football, running back and possibly National Football League. I would also suggest rewording it to something like: "... that, despite Temple running back Matt Brown only being 5 feet 5 inches tall, the Tampa Bay Buccaneers just signed him to a three-year NFL contract?" Hope this helps. – PeeJay 13:28, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
- Sorry about the links, I misread some of the rules about what could be and could not be linked in a DYK. The new hook is better. Changes finished, thanks for the input.«Marylandstater» «reply» 00:58, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
Looks good now! I still might suggest adding a link to National Football League, but even without it, you have my support. – PeeJay 01:11, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
Done.«Marylandstater» «reply» 02:48, 3 June 2013 (UTC)