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imported>Graeme Bartlett
(User talk:NNUR06BikaJiang5090623 wrote the paragraph with missing ref)
imported>Muboshgu
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:*Good catch, I totally missed that. – [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 00:39, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
 
:*Good catch, I totally missed that. – [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 00:39, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
 
::*Yes somehow I missed that too.  I have asked [[User talk:NNUR06BikaJiang5090623]] who wrote that paragraph where the information came from. [[User:Graeme Bartlett|Graeme Bartlett]] ([[User talk:Graeme Bartlett|talk]]) 10:22, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
 
::*Yes somehow I missed that too.  I have asked [[User talk:NNUR06BikaJiang5090623]] who wrote that paragraph where the information came from. [[User:Graeme Bartlett|Graeme Bartlett]] ([[User talk:Graeme Bartlett|talk]]) 10:22, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
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:::*Any response? – [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 19:47, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 19:47, 15 May 2012

Mei Baojiu

  • ... that as a child Mei Baojiu had such a beautiful appearance and delicate voice that his father sent him to study Peking opera?
  • Reviewed: I will review some later
  • Comment: Nanjing Normal University class project moved to article space on 13 April 2012

Created/expanded by NNUR06KceniaXie5090624 (talk), NNUR06ConiaWei5090627 (talk), NNUR06BikaJiang5090623 (talk). Nominated by Graeme Bartlett (talk) at 08:46, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

  • Serious problems with this article, primarily NPOV language and essay-like style, as well as whole paragraphs with no citations. Hook is not particularly interesting, either; many precocious children are sent to study their craft at young ages, so what makes him unique? – Muboshgu (talk) 17:02, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
  • not to mention lousy refs, including bare urls. PumpkinSky talk 02:14, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
  • I have cleaned up some POV language, embellished the references so that there are no bare URLs, and cited all the paragraphs.
  • alt1 ... that Mei Baojiu is the leader of the Mei Lanfang Peking Opera troupe?
  • How about alt1 hook? Graeme Bartlett (talk) 10:27, 7 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Family section is unreferenced. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:17, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Good catch, I totally missed that. – Muboshgu (talk) 00:39, 9 May 2012 (UTC)