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* ... that ''[[CCM Magazine]]'' on [[KJ-52]]'s new album '''''[[Mental (album)|Mental]]''''' showcases, "the multi-Dove Award-winning wordsmith poises his ninth recording for the ultimate spiritual confrontation."?
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* .<s>.. that ''[[CCM Magazine]]'' on [[KJ-52]]'s new album '''''[[Mental (album)|Mental]]''''' showcases, "the multi-Dove Award-winning wordsmith poises his ninth recording for the ultimate spiritual confrontation."?</s>
 
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:* The article is new enough and long enough, the hook is cited, and the only copyright violation issues raised by the [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Mental+%28album%29&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1 Earwig tool] are for blocks of text that are attributed in quotes in the article, so that doesn't seem to be an issue. I am, however, concerned about the grammar in the hook. Perhaps something like "...that Andrew Greer wrote in ''[[CCM Magazine]]'' that [[KJ-52]]'s new album '''''[[Mental (album)|Mental]]''''' showcases '"the multi-Dove Award-winning wordsmith pois[ing] his ninth recording for the ultimate spiritual confrontation."? Other than that I think this is good to go. [[User:Everymorning|<font color="orange">Everymorning</font>]] [[User talk:Everymorning|<font color="green">talk</font>]] 02:41, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
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:* The article is new enough and long enough, the hook is cited, and the only copyright violation issues raised by the [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Mental+%28album%29&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1 Earwig tool] are for blocks of text that are attributed in quotes in the article, so that doesn't seem to be an issue. I am, however, concerned about the grammar in the hook. Perhaps something like '''ALT1:''' ... that Andrew Greer wrote in ''[[CCM Magazine]]'' that [[KJ-52]]'s new album '''''[[Mental (album)|Mental]]''''' showcases "the multi-Dove Award-winning wordsmith pois[ing] his ninth recording for the ultimate spiritual confrontation"? Other than that I think this is good to go. [[User:Everymorning|<font color="orange">Everymorning</font>]] [[User talk:Everymorning|<font color="green">talk</font>]] 02:41, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
 
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::*The original hook is grammatically bad enough that I've struck it. [[User:Mandarax|<span style="color:green">M<small>AN</small>d<small>ARAX</small></span>]]&nbsp;<span style="color:blue">•</span>&nbsp;[[User talk:Mandarax|<span style="color:#999900"><small>XAЯA</small>b<small>ИA</small>M</span>]] 03:19, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
 
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Mental (album)

  • ... that CCM Magazine on KJ-52's new album Mental showcases, "the multi-Dove Award-winning wordsmith poises his ninth recording for the ultimate spiritual confrontation."?

Created by The New Testament (talk). Self nominated at 01:37, 21 January 2015 (UTC).

  • The article is new enough and long enough, the hook is cited, and the only copyright violation issues raised by the Earwig tool are for blocks of text that are attributed in quotes in the article, so that doesn't seem to be an issue. I am, however, concerned about the grammar in the hook. Perhaps something like ALT1: ... that Andrew Greer wrote in CCM Magazine that KJ-52's new album Mental showcases "the multi-Dove Award-winning wordsmith pois[ing] his ninth recording for the ultimate spiritual confrontation"? Other than that I think this is good to go. Everymorning talk 02:41, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
  • The original hook is grammatically bad enough that I've struck it. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 03:19, 23 January 2015 (UTC)