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:::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Looks good to go now. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 23:03, 19 October 2020 (UTC) | :::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Looks good to go now. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 23:03, 19 October 2020 (UTC) | ||
::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]{{ping|Morgan695}} I was going to promote this to the October 31 set because, well, it's just like promoting it to any set. But based on the source, I wonder if you want to write a more obvious Halloween-themed hook. You will need to add in the fact they used to store the beer and wine in the basement, and you have: | ::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]{{ping|Morgan695}} I was going to promote this to the October 31 set because, well, it's just like promoting it to any set. But based on the source, I wonder if you want to write a more obvious Halloween-themed hook. You will need to add in the fact they used to store the beer and wine in the basement, and you have: | ||
| − | ::::*'''ALT2''': ... that at the '''[[Metropolitan (bar)|Metropolitan]]''', a gay bar that sits on a plot formerly occupied by a colonial-era cemetery, the spirits flow both upstairs and below-ground? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:08, 21 October 2020 (UTC) | + | ::::*'''ALT2''':<s> ... that at the '''[[Metropolitan (bar)|Metropolitan]]''', a gay bar that sits on a plot formerly occupied by a colonial-era cemetery, the spirits flow both upstairs and below-ground? </s>[[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:08, 21 October 2020 (UTC) |
:::::*The "spirits flow" part is confusing divorced from the context of the original article. I'd prefer one of the original hooks, even if that makes it unsuitable for an Oct 31 post date. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 20:06, 21 October 2020 (UTC) | :::::*The "spirits flow" part is confusing divorced from the context of the original article. I'd prefer one of the original hooks, even if that makes it unsuitable for an Oct 31 post date. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 20:06, 21 October 2020 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] OK. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:58, 21 October 2020 (UTC) | ||
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Metropolitan (bar)
- ... that the New York City gay bar Metropolitan (pictured) sits on a site formerly occupied by a colonial-era cemetery? Source: 1
- ALT1:... that the New York City gay bar Metropolitan (pictured) sits on a site formerly occupied by a colonial-era cemetery and a Prohibition-era speakeasy? Source: 1
- Reviewed: Hallucinate (song)
- Comment: ALT0 has potential as a hook for Halloween, if needed.
Created by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:48, 19 October 2020 (UTC).
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- Template:Reply to Thank you for the speedy review. QPQ has been completed. Morgan695 (talk) 22:40, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
Looks good to go now. epicgenius (talk) 23:03, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
Template:Ping I was going to promote this to the October 31 set because, well, it's just like promoting it to any set. But based on the source, I wonder if you want to write a more obvious Halloween-themed hook. You will need to add in the fact they used to store the beer and wine in the basement, and you have:- ALT2:
... that at the Metropolitan, a gay bar that sits on a plot formerly occupied by a colonial-era cemetery, the spirits flow both upstairs and below-ground?Yoninah (talk) 19:08, 21 October 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Reply to Thank you for the speedy review. QPQ has been completed. Morgan695 (talk) 22:40, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
