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:: '''Comment''': I wanted to write a review, but am too late ;) - How about mentioning [[Henry Nott]], as the French Wikipedia does, and using [[:File:Henry Nott (1899).jpg|this image]] also, for a feeling of the time? I am also not happy with the phrase in the lead "the arrival ... and the landing", thinking that the arrival is the landing. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:11, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
 
:: '''Comment''': I wanted to write a review, but am too late ;) - How about mentioning [[Henry Nott]], as the French Wikipedia does, and using [[:File:Henry Nott (1899).jpg|this image]] also, for a feeling of the time? I am also not happy with the phrase in the lead "the arrival ... and the landing", thinking that the arrival is the landing. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:11, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
 
:::As used in the article, I read it as "arrival" refers to the missionaries in French Polynesia as a whole, and "landing" referring only to the specific place the ship docked. [[User:Maile66|— Maile ]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 16:19, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
 
:::As used in the article, I read it as "arrival" refers to the missionaries in French Polynesia as a whole, and "landing" referring only to the specific place the ship docked. [[User:Maile66|— Maile ]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 16:19, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
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:::: I understand that missionaries arrived before, but these specific ones that day by that ship, --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:56, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Missionary Day

The missionary ship Duff, 1797
The missionary ship Duff, 1797

Created by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 00:24, 27 January 2017 (UTC).

  • Review by Maile
QPQ
  • QPQ review by KAVEBEAR has not been used as a QPQ on any other nomination
Eligibility
  • Article created by KAVEBEAR on January 26, 2017, and has 1735 characters (0 words) "readable prose size"
  • Article is NPOV, currently stable, no dispute tags
Sourcing
  • Citations are appropriately placed in every paragraph and correctly formatted
  • No bare URLs, and no external links used as inline sources
Hook
  • Hook is 150 characters, NPOV, stated in the article and sourced where stated
Image
  • Image used is in the article, uploaded on Commons and dated circa 1820s, sourced with a working link to the Library of New Zealand, and PD in the country of origin
Tools
  • Earwig's Copyvio Detector showed no issues of concern.
  • I read through the sources that were in English, and saw no issues of concern.
  • AGF on the non-English sources

Symbol confirmed.svgSymbol voting keep.svg Good 2 Go. As a total aside to this review, I found the source To Live Among the Stars: Christian Origins in Oceania really interesting reading, as far as what I could access on Google's limited view. — Maile (talk) 16:00, 9 February 2017 (UTC)

Comment: I wanted to write a review, but am too late ;) - How about mentioning Henry Nott, as the French Wikipedia does, and using this image also, for a feeling of the time? I am also not happy with the phrase in the lead "the arrival ... and the landing", thinking that the arrival is the landing. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:11, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
As used in the article, I read it as "arrival" refers to the missionaries in French Polynesia as a whole, and "landing" referring only to the specific place the ship docked. — Maile (talk) 16:19, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
I understand that missionaries arrived before, but these specific ones that day by that ship, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:56, 9 February 2017 (UTC)