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:* ''Comment'' Review under way.'' <span style="text-shadow:#396 0.2em 0.2em 0.5em; class=texhtml">[[User:7&amp;6=thirteen|<b style="color:#060">7&amp;6=thirteen</b>]] ([[User talk:7&amp;6=thirteen|<b style="color:#000">☎</b>]])</span> 16:09, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
 
:* ''Comment'' Review under way.'' <span style="text-shadow:#396 0.2em 0.2em 0.5em; class=texhtml">[[User:7&amp;6=thirteen|<b style="color:#060">7&amp;6=thirteen</b>]] ([[User talk:7&amp;6=thirteen|<b style="color:#000">☎</b>]])</span> 16:09, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
* '''Review''' [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New article, timely nominated.  Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations; is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism.  DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough.  Every paragraph is cited. [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Mohamed+Hadid&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=11 Earwig's copy violation detector: Mohamed Hadid] report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article.  It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. I might rephrase the hook as "... that devout Muslim '''[[Mohamed Hadid]]''', a life long tea totaller, owns a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and his own [[Beverly Hills]] winery? Which is really just a rewrite of the present hook.  QPQ not yet done.  
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* '''Review''' [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New article, timely nominated.  Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations; is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism.  DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough.  Every paragraph is cited. [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Mohamed+Hadid&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=11 Earwig's copy violation detector: Mohamed Hadid] report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article.  It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. I might rephrase the hook as "... that devout Muslim '''[[Mohamed Hadid]]''', a life long tea totaller, owns a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and a [[Beverly Hills]] winery?" Which is really just a rewrite of the present hook.  QPQ not yet done.  
 
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Revision as of 21:11, 30 December 2015

Mohamed Hadid

  • Reviewed: not yet done

Created by Edwardx (talk), Zigzig20s (talk), Tenebrae (talk), and Dundun1984 (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 20:33, 27 December 2015 (UTC).

  • Review Symbol question.svg New article, timely nominated. Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations; is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough. Every paragraph is cited. Earwig's copy violation detector: Mohamed Hadid report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article. It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. I might rephrase the hook as "... that devout Muslim Mohamed Hadid, a life long tea totaller, owns a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and a Beverly Hills winery?" Which is really just a rewrite of the present hook. QPQ not yet done.