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* ... that '''[[Mohamed Hadid]]''' has a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and his own [[Beverly Hills]] winery, but has never drunk alcohol? | * ... that '''[[Mohamed Hadid]]''' has a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and his own [[Beverly Hills]] winery, but has never drunk alcohol? | ||
+ | * '''ALT1''' ... that devout Muslim '''[[Mohamed Hadid]]''', a life-long [[teetotalism|teetotaler]], owns a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and a [[Beverly Hills]] winery? | ||
− | :* ''Reviewed'': | + | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Kathy Bardswick|Kathy Bardswick]] |
<small>Created by [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]), [[User:Zigzig20s|Zigzig20s]] ([[User talk:Zigzig20s|talk]]), [[User:Tenebrae|Tenebrae]] ([[User talk:Tenebrae|talk]]), and [[User:Dundun1984|Dundun1984]] ([[User talk:Dundun1984|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) at 20:33, 27 December 2015 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]), [[User:Zigzig20s|Zigzig20s]] ([[User talk:Zigzig20s|talk]]), [[User:Tenebrae|Tenebrae]] ([[User talk:Tenebrae|talk]]), and [[User:Dundun1984|Dundun1984]] ([[User talk:Dundun1984|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) at 20:33, 27 December 2015 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:* ''Comment'' Review under way.'' <span style="text-shadow:#396 0.2em 0.2em 0.5em; class=texhtml">[[User:7&6=thirteen|<b style="color:#060">7&6=thirteen</b>]] ([[User talk:7&6=thirteen|<b style="color:#000">☎</b>]])</span> 16:09, 30 December 2015 (UTC) | :* ''Comment'' Review under way.'' <span style="text-shadow:#396 0.2em 0.2em 0.5em; class=texhtml">[[User:7&6=thirteen|<b style="color:#060">7&6=thirteen</b>]] ([[User talk:7&6=thirteen|<b style="color:#000">☎</b>]])</span> 16:09, 30 December 2015 (UTC) | ||
* '''Review''' [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New article, timely nominated. Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations; is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough. Every paragraph is cited. [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Mohamed+Hadid&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=11 Earwig's copy violation detector: Mohamed Hadid] report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article. It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. I might rephrase the hook as "... that devout Muslim '''[[Mohamed Hadid]]''', a life long tea totaller, owns a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and a [[Beverly Hills]] winery?" Which is really just a rewrite of the present hook. Either phrasing of the hooks is supported by the following: {{cite news|last1=Farameh|first1=Patrice|title=Hadid’s Modern Masterpiece: Mohamed Hadid|url=http://hauteliving.com/2008/07/hadids-modern-masterpiece/3038/|accessdate=20 December 2015|work=[[Haute Living]]|date=1 July 2008|quote=Even though he has never indulged in alcohol in his life, his 5,000-bottle wine cellar is filled with the best French and Californian wines. Not only does his collection consist of a diverse range of premium wines from local vineyards such as Summerland Winery, but it also includes bottles from his very own winery in Beverly Hills.}} QPQ not yet done. <span style="text-shadow:#396 0.2em 0.2em 0.5em; class=texhtml">[[User:7&6=thirteen|<b style="color:#060">7&6=thirteen</b>]] ([[User talk:7&6=thirteen|<b style="color:#000">☎</b>]])</span> 22:32, 30 December 2015 (UTC) | * '''Review''' [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New article, timely nominated. Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations; is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough. Every paragraph is cited. [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Mohamed+Hadid&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=11 Earwig's copy violation detector: Mohamed Hadid] report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article. It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. I might rephrase the hook as "... that devout Muslim '''[[Mohamed Hadid]]''', a life long tea totaller, owns a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and a [[Beverly Hills]] winery?" Which is really just a rewrite of the present hook. Either phrasing of the hooks is supported by the following: {{cite news|last1=Farameh|first1=Patrice|title=Hadid’s Modern Masterpiece: Mohamed Hadid|url=http://hauteliving.com/2008/07/hadids-modern-masterpiece/3038/|accessdate=20 December 2015|work=[[Haute Living]]|date=1 July 2008|quote=Even though he has never indulged in alcohol in his life, his 5,000-bottle wine cellar is filled with the best French and Californian wines. Not only does his collection consist of a diverse range of premium wines from local vineyards such as Summerland Winery, but it also includes bottles from his very own winery in Beverly Hills.}} QPQ not yet done. <span style="text-shadow:#396 0.2em 0.2em 0.5em; class=texhtml">[[User:7&6=thirteen|<b style="color:#060">7&6=thirteen</b>]] ([[User talk:7&6=thirteen|<b style="color:#000">☎</b>]])</span> 22:32, 30 December 2015 (UTC) | ||
+ | :* Thank you [[User:7&6=thirteen|7&6=thirteen]]. I've done the QPQ, and added an ALT1, as you have suggested. [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 13:12, 31 December 2015 (UTC) | ||
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Mohamed Hadid
- ... that Mohamed Hadid has a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and his own Beverly Hills winery, but has never drunk alcohol?
- ALT1 ... that devout Muslim Mohamed Hadid, a life-long teetotaler, owns a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and a Beverly Hills winery?
- Reviewed: Kathy Bardswick
Created by Edwardx (talk), Zigzig20s (talk), Tenebrae (talk), and Dundun1984 (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 20:33, 27 December 2015 (UTC).
- Comment Review under way. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 16:09, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
- Review
New article, timely nominated. Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations; is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough. Every paragraph is cited. Earwig's copy violation detector: Mohamed Hadid report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article. It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. I might rephrase the hook as "... that devout Muslim Mohamed Hadid, a life long tea totaller, owns a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and a Beverly Hills winery?" Which is really just a rewrite of the present hook. Either phrasing of the hooks is supported by the following: Farameh, Patrice (1 July 2008). "Hadid's Modern Masterpiece: Mohamed Hadid". Haute Living. Retrieved 20 December 2015.
Even though he has never indulged in alcohol in his life, his 5,000-bottle wine cellar is filled with the best French and Californian wines. Not only does his collection consist of a diverse range of premium wines from local vineyards such as Summerland Winery, but it also includes bottles from his very own winery in Beverly Hills.
QPQ not yet done. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 22:32, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you 7&6=thirteen. I've done the QPQ, and added an ALT1, as you have suggested. Edwardx (talk) 13:12, 31 December 2015 (UTC)