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* ... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa ‎|Mount Hope]]''' site was visited by authors of [[Herman Melville|Moby Dick]] and [[John Steinbeck|The Grapes of Wrath]]?<small> Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/172416], [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
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* <s>... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa ‎|Mount Hope]]''' site was visited by authors of [[Herman Melville|Moby Dick]] and [[John Steinbeck|The Grapes of Wrath]]?</s> <small> Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/172416], [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
** '''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa|Mount Hope]]''' site was visited by [[Herman Melville]] and [[John Steinbeck]]?<small> Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/172416], [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
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** '''ALT1''': <s>... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa|Mount Hope]]''' site was visited by [[Herman Melville]] and [[John Steinbeck]]?</s><small> Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/172416], [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
** '''ALT2''': ... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa‎|Mount Hope]]''' farm was commemorated in the name of [[Hatikva Quarter]] in south Tel Aviv ? <small>Source:[https://www.haaretz.co.il/1.1161275</small>]
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** '''ALT2''': <s>... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa‎|Mount Hope]]''' farm was commemorated in the name of [[Hatikva Quarter]] in south Tel Aviv?</s> <small>Source:[https://www.haaretz.co.il/1.1161275</small>]
 
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:* ''Reviewed'': Not needed my third nomination.
 
:* ''Reviewed'': Not needed my third nomination.
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting, on good sources, Hebrew sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - The hooks need work, I think. How about mentioning Jaffa? Saying not "site" but something more precise such as "former [educational] farm"? As cute as it is to combine quirky things, original hook and ALT1 rely on people knowing titles and/or authors. How about focusing on Steinbeck and saying that he not only visited but had his roots there? - How do you feel about an infobox, which would show at a glance that it's not about a mountain? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 12:31, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting, on good sources, Hebrew sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - The hooks need work, I think. How about mentioning Jaffa? Saying not "site" but something more precise such as "former [educational] farm"? As cute as it is to combine quirky things, original hook and ALT1 rely on people knowing titles and/or authors. How about focusing on Steinbeck and saying that he not only visited but had his roots there? - How do you feel about an infobox, which would show at a glance that it's not about a mountain? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 12:31, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
** '''ALT4''': ... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa|Mount Hope]]''' former farm near [[Jaffa]]  was founded by grandparents of [[John Steinbeck]] and he visited the remnants during his visit to [[Israel]]?<small> Source: John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966  [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
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* '''ALT3''': <s>... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa|Mount Hope]]''' former farm near [[Jaffa]]  was founded by grandparents of [[John Steinbeck]] and he visited the remnants during his visit to [[Israel]]?</s><small> Source: John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966  [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
 
***[[User:Gerda Arendt]] If you could improve the hook any futher I would be gratefull.I will add the infobox [[user:Shrike|Shrike]] ([[User talk:Shrike|talk]]) 13:38, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
 
***[[User:Gerda Arendt]] If you could improve the hook any futher I would be gratefull.I will add the infobox [[user:Shrike|Shrike]] ([[User talk:Shrike|talk]]) 13:38, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
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:::: Thank you, how is this:
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:::: '''ALT5''': ... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa|Mount Hope]]''', a farm near [[Jaffa]], was founded by grandparents of [[John Steinbeck]], who visited its remnants?
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:::: [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] but I'll watch for other ideas. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 14:37, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
 
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Mount Hope(Ottoman Empire)

  • ... that Mount Hope site was visited by authors of Moby Dick and The Grapes of Wrath? Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [1], [2]
    • ALT1: ... that Mount Hope site was visited by Herman Melville and John Steinbeck? Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [3], [4]
    • ALT2: ... that Mount Hope farm was commemorated in the name of Hatikva Quarter in south Tel Aviv? Source:

  • Reviewed: Not needed my third nomination.

Created by Shrike (talk). Self-nominated at 08:29, 12 June 2018 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Interesting, on good sources, Hebrew sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - The hooks need work, I think. How about mentioning Jaffa? Saying not "site" but something more precise such as "former [educational] farm"? As cute as it is to combine quirky things, original hook and ALT1 rely on people knowing titles and/or authors. How about focusing on Steinbeck and saying that he not only visited but had his roots there? - How do you feel about an infobox, which would show at a glance that it's not about a mountain? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:31, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
  • ALT3: ... that Mount Hope former farm near Jaffa was founded by grandparents of John Steinbeck and he visited the remnants during his visit to Israel? Source: John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [5]
      • User:Gerda Arendt If you could improve the hook any futher I would be gratefull.I will add the infobox Shrike (talk) 13:38, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
Thank you, how is this:
ALT5: ... that Mount Hope, a farm near Jaffa, was founded by grandparents of John Steinbeck, who visited its remnants?
Symbol voting keep.svg but I'll watch for other ideas. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:37, 18 June 2018 (UTC)