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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new and long enough at 3,091 chars during nomination time. "Murder" section, the first paragraph of section "Arrest and execution" are lacking an inline ref. Ref #3 says "hanged around 4:30 AM" not at "4:30 AM" explicitly. Ref #4 is [[WP:LR]]. In the second paragraph of "Reaction to the execution" section, the opening quatation mark is missing. Earwig's Copyvio Detector reports high-rated copyvios on four refs. The article is neutral. I prefer ALT1-jook as more interesting, however, the article says 28 bullets while the hook 25. No refs at all are given for hook facts "25 bullets" and "Asia Bibi". QPQ was done. Acceptance will be done after addressing above issues. [[User talk:CeeGee|CeeGee]] 11:23, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new and long enough at 3,091 chars during nomination time. "Murder" section, the first paragraph of section "Arrest and execution" are lacking an inline ref. Ref #3 says "hanged around 4:30 AM" not at "4:30 AM" explicitly. Ref #4 is [[WP:LR]]. In the second paragraph of "Reaction to the execution" section, the opening quatation mark is missing. Earwig's Copyvio Detector reports high-rated copyvios on four refs. The article is neutral. I prefer ALT1-jook as more interesting, however, the article says 28 bullets while the hook 25. No refs at all are given for hook facts "25 bullets" and "Asia Bibi". QPQ was done. Acceptance will be done after addressing above issues. [[User talk:CeeGee|CeeGee]] 11:23, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
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:{{ping|CeeGee}} I have made some changes. You can make it better yourself. Reviewer can make the minor changes himself.-<span style="border:2px solid #090E0E;padding:0px;"><font style="color:#FFFFFF;background:#000000;">[[User:Musa Raza|Musa]]</font>[[User talk:Musa Raza|<font style="color:#000000;background:#00B6B3;">&nbsp;Talk&nbsp;</font>]] </span> 16:55, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
  
  
 
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Mumtaz Qadri

Created by Musa Raza (talk). Nominated by Captain Assassin! (talk) at 17:36, 4 March 2016 (UTC).

  • 16px The article is new and long enough at 3,091 chars during nomination time. "Murder" section, the first paragraph of section "Arrest and execution" are lacking an inline ref. Ref #3 says "hanged around 4:30 AM" not at "4:30 AM" explicitly. Ref #4 is WP:LR. In the second paragraph of "Reaction to the execution" section, the opening quatation mark is missing. Earwig's Copyvio Detector reports high-rated copyvios on four refs. The article is neutral. I prefer ALT1-jook as more interesting, however, the article says 28 bullets while the hook 25. No refs at all are given for hook facts "25 bullets" and "Asia Bibi". QPQ was done. Acceptance will be done after addressing above issues. CeeGee 11:23, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
Template:Ping I have made some changes. You can make it better yourself. Reviewer can make the minor changes himself.-Musa Talk  16:55, 24 March 2016 (UTC)