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:*{{reply to|Yunshui|Tksb}} Do you have any comments? – [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 15:02, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 
:*{{reply to|Yunshui|Tksb}} Do you have any comments? – [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 15:02, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 
::*I see your point. I'm in favour of changing the article, myself, so I'll go and do that now. [[User:Yunshui|Yunshui]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Yunshui|<sup style="font-size:90%">雲</sup>]][[Special:Contributions/Yunshui|<sub style="font-size:90%">水</sub>]] 15:09, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 
::*I see your point. I'm in favour of changing the article, myself, so I'll go and do that now. [[User:Yunshui|Yunshui]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Yunshui|<sup style="font-size:90%">雲</sup>]][[Special:Contributions/Yunshui|<sub style="font-size:90%">水</sub>]] 15:09, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] The original hook looks good to go. [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 18:25, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
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:::*<s>[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] The original hook looks good to go. [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 18:25, 30 October 2014 (UTC)</s>
 
::::*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  {{ping|Epicgenius}}  Per [[Wikipedia:Did you know/Supplementary guidelines#Rules for evaluating other people's hooks and articles|Rule H2]], you cannot approve your own hook. This review is also incomplete. Details that are supposed to be checked in a review can be found at [[Wikipedia:Did you know/Reviewing guide| DYK Reviewing guide]]. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:16, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  {{ping|Epicgenius}}  Per [[Wikipedia:Did you know/Supplementary guidelines#Rules for evaluating other people's hooks and articles|Rule H2]], you cannot approve your own hook. This review is also incomplete. Details that are supposed to be checked in a review can be found at [[Wikipedia:Did you know/Reviewing guide| DYK Reviewing guide]]. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:16, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 
:::::*{{U|Yoninah}}, I am not approving my own hook, so there may be confusion about that. I have edited my comment, to indicate the original hook is the one that I approve. [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 19:20, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 
:::::*{{U|Yoninah}}, I am not approving my own hook, so there may be confusion about that. I have edited my comment, to indicate the original hook is the one that I approve. [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 19:20, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
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:*''To finish off the review:''
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:**The '''5x expansion''' has been verified.
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:**I cannot see any foreign-language sources that are denoted as such.
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:**I used a plagiarism checker, and the text does not appear to have been copied without attribution (i.e. it is original text).
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:**The article has a neutral POV.
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:* ''Now'' it is good to go. I am not very familiar with doing DYK reviews, so I apologize for any snags. – [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 19:26, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 19:26, 30 October 2014

Murata Jukō

5x expanded by Yunshui (talk), Tksb (talk). Nominated by Yunshui (talk) at 12:03, 29 October 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Looks good; the whole article is referenced, esp. that statement.

    However, we can also say that:

  • I see your point. I'm in favour of changing the article, myself, so I'll go and do that now. Yunshui  15:09, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg The original hook looks good to go. Epicgenius (talk) 18:25, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Template:U, I am not approving my own hook, so there may be confusion about that. I have edited my comment, to indicate the original hook is the one that I approve. Epicgenius (talk) 19:20, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
  • To finish off the review:
    • The 5x expansion has been verified.
    • I cannot see any foreign-language sources that are denoted as such.
    • I used a plagiarism checker, and the text does not appear to have been copied without attribution (i.e. it is original text).
    • The article has a neutral POV.
  • Now it is good to go. I am not very familiar with doing DYK reviews, so I apologize for any snags. – Epicgenius (talk) 19:26, 30 October 2014 (UTC)