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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Looks good; the whole article is referenced, esp. that statement.<p>However, we can also say that: | :* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Looks good; the whole article is referenced, esp. that statement.<p>However, we can also say that: | ||
| − | ::*'''ALT1:''' ... that '''[[Murata Jukō]]''' created ''chanoyu'', the [[Japanese tea ceremony]]? | + | ::*'''ALT1:''' <s>... that '''[[Murata Jukō]]''' created ''chanoyu'', the [[Japanese tea ceremony]]? </s> |
:*This alt would be less confusing, as the article references ''chanoyu'', but Japanese tea ceremony is linked, i.e. {{tq|<nowiki>[[Japanese tea ceremony|chanoyu]]</nowiki>}}. – [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 20:05, 29 October 2014 (UTC) | :*This alt would be less confusing, as the article references ''chanoyu'', but Japanese tea ceremony is linked, i.e. {{tq|<nowiki>[[Japanese tea ceremony|chanoyu]]</nowiki>}}. – [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 20:05, 29 October 2014 (UTC) | ||
:* As an alternative, the article itself can be changed to link directly to [[Japanese tea ceremony]], and we can keep the existing hook: i.e. {{tq|<nowiki>as the founder of chanoyu, the [[Japanese tea ceremony]]</nowiki>}}. | :* As an alternative, the article itself can be changed to link directly to [[Japanese tea ceremony]], and we can keep the existing hook: i.e. {{tq|<nowiki>as the founder of chanoyu, the [[Japanese tea ceremony]]</nowiki>}}. | ||
Revision as of 19:37, 30 October 2014
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Murata Jukō
- ... that Murata Jukō created the Japanese tea ceremony?
- Reviewed: Herdla Airport
5x expanded by Yunshui (talk), Tksb (talk). Nominated by Yunshui (talk) at 12:03, 29 October 2014 (UTC).
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... that Murata Jukō created chanoyu, the Japanese tea ceremony?
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- This alt would be less confusing, as the article references chanoyu, but Japanese tea ceremony is linked, i.e. Template:Tq. – Epicgenius (talk) 20:05, 29 October 2014 (UTC)
- As an alternative, the article itself can be changed to link directly to Japanese tea ceremony, and we can keep the existing hook: i.e. Template:Tq.
- Template:Reply to Do you have any comments? – Epicgenius (talk) 15:02, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
- I see your point. I'm in favour of changing the article, myself, so I'll go and do that now. Yunshui 雲水 15:09, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
The original hook looks good to go. Epicgenius (talk) 18:25, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
Template:Ping Per Rule H2, you cannot approve your own hook. This review is also incomplete. Details that are supposed to be checked in a review can be found at DYK Reviewing guide. Yoninah (talk) 19:16, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
- Template:U, I am not approving my own hook, so there may be confusion about that. I have edited my comment, to indicate the original hook is the one that I approve. I would like to complete the review: Epicgenius (talk) 19:20, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
- To finish off the review:
- The 5x expansion has been verified. Its prose is long enough.
- I cannot see any foreign-language sources that are denoted as such.
- I used a plagiarism checker, and the text does not appear to have been copied without attribution (i.e. it is original text).
- The article has a neutral POV.
Now the original hook is good to go. I am not very familiar with doing DYK reviews, so I apologize for any snags. – Epicgenius (talk) 19:26, 30 October 2014 (UTC)