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====Nano Riantiarno==== | ====Nano Riantiarno==== | ||
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{{*mp}}... that '''[[Nano Riantiarno]]''' wrote "operas" about white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation? | {{*mp}}... that '''[[Nano Riantiarno]]''' wrote "operas" about white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation? | ||
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<small>Created by [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]). Self nom at 13:04, 20 August 2011 (UTC)</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]). Self nom at 13:04, 20 August 2011 (UTC)</small> | ||
| − | + | :*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Size/referencing/etc. look good. However, I'm a little iffy about the hook - are the Cockroach Opera and the Constipation Opera actually about these subjects? Isn't it just the titles? [[User:Roscelese|Roscelese]] ([[User talk:Roscelese|talk]] ⋅ [[Special:Contributions/Roscelese|contribs]]) 16:55, 20 August 2011 (UTC) | |
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| − | :*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Size/referencing/etc. look good. However, I'm a little iffy about the hook - are the Cockroach Opera and the Constipation Opera actually about these subjects? Isn't it just the titles? [[User:Roscelese|Roscelese]] ([[User talk:Roscelese|talk]] ⋅ [[Special:Contributions/Roscelese|contribs]]) 16:55, 20 August 2011 (UTC) | ||
*Reviewed: [[Template:Did you know nominations/Sanzo Nosaka|Sanzo Nosaka]] | *Reviewed: [[Template:Did you know nominations/Sanzo Nosaka|Sanzo Nosaka]] | ||
::*Metaphorically, but the context is not in the article. How about ALT1 "... that '''[[Nano Riantiarno]]'''{{`s}} "opera" titles include white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation?" | ::*Metaphorically, but the context is not in the article. How about ALT1 "... that '''[[Nano Riantiarno]]'''{{`s}} "opera" titles include white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation?" | ||
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::::Having ''Opera'' so many times seems pointless. How about '''ALT3''' ... that '''[[Nano Riantiarno]]'''{{`s}} works include the ''Cockroach'', ''White Snake'', and ''Constipation'' "operas"? [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 04:26, 21 August 2011 (UTC) | ::::Having ''Opera'' so many times seems pointless. How about '''ALT3''' ... that '''[[Nano Riantiarno]]'''{{`s}} works include the ''Cockroach'', ''White Snake'', and ''Constipation'' "operas"? [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 04:26, 21 August 2011 (UTC) | ||
:::::I think that's good. [[User:Roscelese|Roscelese]] ([[User talk:Roscelese|talk]] ⋅ [[Special:Contributions/Roscelese|contribs]]) 04:55, 21 August 2011 (UTC) | :::::I think that's good. [[User:Roscelese|Roscelese]] ([[User talk:Roscelese|talk]] ⋅ [[Special:Contributions/Roscelese|contribs]]) 04:55, 21 August 2011 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 06:41, 25 August 2011
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:41, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
Nano Riantiarno
- ... that Nano Riantiarno wrote "operas" about white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation?
Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 13:04, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Sanzo Nosaka
- Metaphorically, but the context is not in the article. How about ALT1 "... that Nano RiantiarnoTemplate:`s "opera" titles include white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation?"
- Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:08, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
- It seems less syntactically and semantically pleasing (I think it's the irregular use of "include"). Something like:
- ALT2: ... that Nano RiantiarnoTemplate:`s works include the Cockroach Opera, the White Snake Opera, and the Constipation Opera?
- --Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 03:01, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
- Having Opera so many times seems pointless. How about ALT3 ... that Nano RiantiarnoTemplate:`s works include the Cockroach, White Snake, and Constipation "operas"? Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:26, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
- I think that's good. Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 04:55, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
- I've removed excessive "the"s from ALT3. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:14, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
- I think that's good. Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 04:55, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
- Having Opera so many times seems pointless. How about ALT3 ... that Nano RiantiarnoTemplate:`s works include the Cockroach, White Snake, and Constipation "operas"? Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:26, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
