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*Hook: To me "has served" sounds weird to me, "been used for" or words to that effect makes more sense for an inanimate object such as an organ.
 
*Hook: To me "has served" sounds weird to me, "been used for" or words to that effect makes more sense for an inanimate object such as an organ.
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Passed for everything but the wording of the hook. [[User:MPJ-DK|'''<span style="background:blue;color:white;border: 1px solid blue">&nbsp;MPJ</span>''']][[User talk:MPJ-DK|<span style="background:red;color:white;border: 1px solid blue">'''-DK'''&nbsp;</span>]] 01:42, 27 December 2016 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Passed for everything but the wording of the hook. [[User:MPJ-DK|'''<span style="background:blue;color:white;border: 1px solid blue">&nbsp;MPJ</span>''']][[User talk:MPJ-DK|<span style="background:red;color:white;border: 1px solid blue">'''-DK'''&nbsp;</span>]] 01:42, 27 December 2016 (UTC)
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::* I'm comfortable with "served" in the hook, it seems common usage for navy ships, pieces of equipment and especially church instruments. I'd also keep the article title Neanderkirche. Place/structure names like this tend to lose meaning if translated too much, and even .en articles on more famous buildings are titled in local language (see: Oude kerk, Amsterdam) [[User:Ultracobalt|Ultracobalt]] ([[User talk:Ultracobalt|talk]]) 04:53, 27 December 2016 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 04:53, 27 December 2016

Neanderkirche

Organ in Neanderkirche
Organ in Neanderkirche
  • ... that the organ of the Neanderkirche has served summer concerts for more than 50 years? Source: [1]

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 22:02, 23 December 2016 (UTC).

  • I will start to review this now. Side note Template:U I changed "sommer" to "summer" in the hook, looked to be an accidental inclusion of the German word for summer.  MPJ-DK  22:55, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
  • Source review - I am not seeing how source #6 supports the claim of being part of "Evangelische Kirchengemeinde Düsseldorf-Mitte." I don't see that mentioned on the page (and yes I read German). Is there something I am missing?
I simply took it from the official website. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:25, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
But that is not the source you cited so I am confused why that citation is there?  MPJ-DK  00:53, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
The reason was a bit of a rush, sorry ;) - I moved the citation. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:03, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
  • is New enough
  • is Long enough (by 44 bytes)
  • is Neutral
  • Has a cited hook
  • Is free of copyright violations.
  • QPQ: I find it a little lacking, it does not address all DYK criteria - Nothing on being new enough or long enough, both of which it passes the review does just not state that. Please try to remember to state all criteria reviewed
  • Question: Since this is English Wikipedia should it be called "Neander Church"? Not sure what the proper naming convention is for something that probably does not have a lot of English language sources??
  • Hook: To me "has served" sounds weird to me, "been used for" or words to that effect makes more sense for an inanimate object such as an organ.
  • Symbol question.svg Passed for everything but the wording of the hook.  MPJ-DK  01:42, 27 December 2016 (UTC)
  • I'm comfortable with "served" in the hook, it seems common usage for navy ships, pieces of equipment and especially church instruments. I'd also keep the article title Neanderkirche. Place/structure names like this tend to lose meaning if translated too much, and even .en articles on more famous buildings are titled in local language (see: Oude kerk, Amsterdam) Ultracobalt (talk) 04:53, 27 December 2016 (UTC)