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* ... that [[Minneapolis]] [[NAACP]] President '''[[Nekima Levy-Pounds]]''' ''(pictured)'' preaches bimonthly?
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::* I'm happily open to alternative suggestions. [[User:Bobamnertiopsis|<font color="660000" face="Andalus">'''Bob'''</font><font color="00FFCC">Amnertiopsis</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Bobamnertiopsis|∴]]<sub><font color="FF9999" face="Tunga">[[User talk:Bobamnertiopsis|ChatMe!]]</font></sub> 14:42, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
 
::* I'm happily open to alternative suggestions. [[User:Bobamnertiopsis|<font color="660000" face="Andalus">'''Bob'''</font><font color="00FFCC">Amnertiopsis</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Bobamnertiopsis|∴]]<sub><font color="FF9999" face="Tunga">[[User talk:Bobamnertiopsis|ChatMe!]]</font></sub> 14:42, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
 
::::'''ALT1''': ... that an award called the Attorney of the Year exists, and was most recently won by '''[[Nekima Levy-Pounds]]'''? There is very little of interest in the whole article.--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 15:21, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
 
::::'''ALT1''': ... that an award called the Attorney of the Year exists, and was most recently won by '''[[Nekima Levy-Pounds]]'''? There is very little of interest in the whole article.--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 15:21, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
:::::'''ALT2''': ... that an organization to help young [[African American]] men avoid gangs and prison cofounded by law professor '''[[Nekima Levy-Pounds]]''' ''(pictured)'' is planning to open a coffee shop?
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:::::'''ALT2''': ... that an organization to help young [[African American]] men avoid gangs and prison, cofounded by law professor '''[[Nekima Levy-Pounds]]''' ''(pictured)'', is planning to open a coffee shop?
 
::::::I like ALT2. Pity I don't know who suggested it...--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 16:10, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
 
::::::I like ALT2. Pity I don't know who suggested it...--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 16:10, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
 
:::::::Mea culpa, that was I! [[User:Bobamnertiopsis|<font color="660000" face="Andalus">'''Bob'''</font><font color="00FFCC">Amnertiopsis</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Bobamnertiopsis|∴]]<sub><font color="FF9999" face="Tunga">[[User talk:Bobamnertiopsis|ChatMe!]]</font></sub> 00:26, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
 
:::::::Mea culpa, that was I! [[User:Bobamnertiopsis|<font color="660000" face="Andalus">'''Bob'''</font><font color="00FFCC">Amnertiopsis</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Bobamnertiopsis|∴]]<sub><font color="FF9999" face="Tunga">[[User talk:Bobamnertiopsis|ChatMe!]]</font></sub> 00:26, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
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* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I'll complete this review since it looks like it has stalled a bit. Article is 4347 characters, moved to mainspace on June 12, and three sources support various parts of the ALT2 hook. I agree that the original hook is a tad boring (and others seem to agree), so I'm striking it. I spotchecked a few sources and found a few similar clumps of words here or there ("...was too focused on issues of police brutality...") but nothing that I would classify as close paraphrasing. I took the liberty of adding two commas in the ALT2 hook but now approve it for the main page. Well done! '''[[User:Ruby2010|<font color="003B48" size="2px">Ruby</font>]]''' [[User talk:Ruby2010|<font color="maroon " size="2px">2010/</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Ruby2010|<font color="maroon " size="2px">2013</font>]] 19:36, 4 July 2015 (UTC)
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Revision as of 19:36, 4 July 2015

Nekima Levy-Pounds

Levy-Pounds marching with a megaphone

Created by Bobamnertiopsis (talk). Self-nominated at 01:16, 13 June 2015 (UTC).

  • This hook is VERY dull! Edwardx (talk) 09:33, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that an award called the Attorney of the Year exists, and was most recently won by Nekima Levy-Pounds? There is very little of interest in the whole article.--Launchballer 15:21, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that an organization to help young African American men avoid gangs and prison, cofounded by law professor Nekima Levy-Pounds (pictured), is planning to open a coffee shop?
I like ALT2. Pity I don't know who suggested it...--Launchballer 16:10, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
Mea culpa, that was I! BobAmnertiopsisChatMe! 00:26, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg I'll complete this review since it looks like it has stalled a bit. Article is 4347 characters, moved to mainspace on June 12, and three sources support various parts of the ALT2 hook. I agree that the original hook is a tad boring (and others seem to agree), so I'm striking it. I spotchecked a few sources and found a few similar clumps of words here or there ("...was too focused on issues of police brutality...") but nothing that I would classify as close paraphrasing. I took the liberty of adding two commas in the ALT2 hook but now approve it for the main page. Well done! Ruby 2010/2013 19:36, 4 July 2015 (UTC)