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:*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Hi, Cwmhiraeth. Nice article as usual; don't think I have any issues to pick with this one. Article went from 423 characters/69 words to 2694 characters/447 words of prose, and is well cited. Hook statements are properly cited within article. The only nitpick that I have is that "of which" is written three times in quick succession in the "Description" section; mind changing a few of them? This shouldn't be an issue with approval for DYK. Thanks in advance. [[User:Cloudchased|Cloudchased]] ([[User talk:Cloudchased|talk]]) 19:01, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Hi, Cwmhiraeth. Nice article as usual; don't think I have any issues to pick with this one. Article went from 423 characters/69 words to 2694 characters/447 words of prose, and is well cited. Hook statements are properly cited within article. The only nitpick that I have is that "of which" is written three times in quick succession in the "Description" section; mind changing a few of them? This shouldn't be an issue with approval for DYK. Thanks in advance. [[User:Cloudchased|Cloudchased]] ([[User talk:Cloudchased|talk]]) 19:01, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
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::: Thanks. I have removed one of the offending "of which"s. They are sometimes necessary to avoid short sentences and repetition. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 20:00, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
  
 
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Neomysis integer

Created/expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nominated at 10:22, 4 March 2014 (UTC).

  • 16px Hi, Cwmhiraeth. Nice article as usual; don't think I have any issues to pick with this one. Article went from 423 characters/69 words to 2694 characters/447 words of prose, and is well cited. Hook statements are properly cited within article. The only nitpick that I have is that "of which" is written three times in quick succession in the "Description" section; mind changing a few of them? This shouldn't be an issue with approval for DYK. Thanks in advance. Cloudchased (talk) 19:01, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
Thanks. I have removed one of the offending "of which"s. They are sometimes necessary to avoid short sentences and repetition. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:00, 4 March 2014 (UTC)