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| − | :* | + | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough, hook is interesting and sourced. No close paraphrasing or neutrality detected. Passed GAN a week ago. QPQ done. I think the word 'appointed' is preferable that the word 'brought' and reconsidering the arrangement of words and other wording which makes the hook; ''... that an officer appointed to investigate [[Vultee Vengeance]] accidents at '''[[No. 75 Wing RAAF]]''', got crash-landed himself while in a Vengeance when he left?''. Besides that everything seems fine. Regards, <span style="background:Gainsboro">[[User:Krishna Chaitanya Velaga|<font color="#FF9933">'''KC'''</font><font color="white">'''Velaga'''</font> ]][[User Talk:KC97|<font color="#128807"><sub>☚╣✉╠☛</sub></font>]] </span> 15:14, 21 July 2016 (UTC) |
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No. 75 Wing RAAF
- ... that an officer brought in to investigate Vultee Vengeance accidents at No. 75 Wing RAAF himself crash-landed in a Vengeance when he left?
- Reviewed: TBA
Improved to Good Article status by Ian Rose (talk). Self-nominated at 11:37, 19 July 2016 (UTC).
Long enough, hook is interesting and sourced. No close paraphrasing or neutrality detected. Passed GAN a week ago. QPQ done. I think the word 'appointed' is preferable that the word 'brought' and reconsidering the arrangement of words and other wording which makes the hook; ... that an officer appointed to investigate Vultee Vengeance accidents at No. 75 Wing RAAF, got crash-landed himself while in a Vengeance when he left?. Besides that everything seems fine. Regards, KCVelaga ☚╣✉╠☛ 15:14, 21 July 2016 (UTC)