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* ... that the '''[[Open Hand Monument]]''' ''(pictured)'', an insignia of  [[Chandigarh]], is a frequent theme in [[Le Corbusier]]'s architecture, a symbol of "peace and reconciliation. It is open to give and open to receive"?
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*<s> ... that the '''[[Open Hand Monument]]''' ''(pictured)'', an insignia of  [[Chandigarh]], is a frequent theme in [[Le Corbusier]]'s architecture, a symbol of "peace and reconciliation. It is open to give and open to receive"?</s>
  
 
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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I copyedited the article and added a tag where a cite is needed. I think the hook quote is a little clumsy with the period in there. Why don't you mention the symbolism of the sculpture to the city of Chandigarh, quoted in Betts, pp. 61-62?  
 
::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I copyedited the article and added a tag where a cite is needed. I think the hook quote is a little clumsy with the period in there. Why don't you mention the symbolism of the sculpture to the city of Chandigarh, quoted in Betts, pp. 61-62?  
 
[[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:36, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
 
[[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:36, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
:::* Thanks for the review. I have fixed the ref to the tag. I propose this '''ALT1 Hook'''...that the '''[[Open Hand Monument]]''' ''(pictured)'' designed by [[Le Corbusier]] symbolizes "hand to give and the hand to take; peace and prosperity, and the unity of mankind"?--'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 06:11, 28 July 2015 (UTC)   
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:::* Thanks for the review. I have fixed the ref to the tag. I propose this '''ALT1 Hook''':
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:::*'''ALT1''': ...that the '''[[Open Hand Monument]]''' ''(pictured)'' designed by [[Le Corbusier]] symbolizes "the hand to give and the hand to take; peace and prosperity, and the unity of mankind"?--'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 06:11, 28 July 2015 (UTC)   
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::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Yes, that works better. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. Image is freely-licensed. Rest of review per Coretheapple. ALT1 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:28, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 11:29, 28 July 2015

Open Hand Monument

Open Hnad Monument in Chandigarh

  • ... that the Open Hand Monument (pictured), an insignia of Chandigarh, is a frequent theme in Le Corbusier's architecture, a symbol of "peace and reconciliation. It is open to give and open to receive"?

5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 14:18, 13 July 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol voting keep.svg Long enough, no copyvios evident, 5X easily attained and QPQ confirmed. Offline hook accepted AGF. Coretheapple (talk) 13:46, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg I copyedited the article and added a tag where a cite is needed. I think the hook quote is a little clumsy with the period in there. Why don't you mention the symbolism of the sculpture to the city of Chandigarh, quoted in Betts, pp. 61-62?

Yoninah (talk) 22:36, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

  • Thanks for the review. I have fixed the ref to the tag. I propose this ALT1 Hook:
  • ALT1: ...that the Open Hand Monument (pictured) designed by Le Corbusier symbolizes "the hand to give and the hand to take; peace and prosperity, and the unity of mankind"?--Nvvchar. 06:11, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Yes, that works better. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. Image is freely-licensed. Rest of review per Coretheapple. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 11:28, 28 July 2015 (UTC)