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:*Article is new enough, long enough, and has adequate references with no evidence of plagiarism; hook is appropriate length with in-line reference. However, hook source is from 2011 so present tense doesn't seem appropriate. While adding "as of" date would take care of this problem, I recommend alternate hook as follows: | :*Article is new enough, long enough, and has adequate references with no evidence of plagiarism; hook is appropriate length with in-line reference. However, hook source is from 2011 so present tense doesn't seem appropriate. While adding "as of" date would take care of this problem, I recommend alternate hook as follows: | ||
| − | ::'''ALT:''' ... that the 30-member '''[[Oregon Mandolin Orchestra]]''' is modeled on the traditional [[mandolin]] orchestras that were popular in the | + | ::'''ALT:''' ... that the 30-member '''[[Oregon Mandolin Orchestra]]''' is modeled on the traditional [[mandolin]] orchestras that were popular in the United States during the [[19th century]]? |
::This hook is covered by the same source as original hook. I've added appropriate text to the article (with in-line reference) to cover ALT hook.--[[User:Orygun|Orygun]] ([[User talk:Orygun|talk]]) 02:53, 20 November 2014 (UTC) | ::This hook is covered by the same source as original hook. I've added appropriate text to the article (with in-line reference) to cover ALT hook.--[[User:Orygun|Orygun]] ([[User talk:Orygun|talk]]) 02:53, 20 November 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Oregon Mandolin Orchestra
- ... that the Oregon Mandolin Orchestra in Hillsboro, Oregon, is the only mandolin orchestra in Oregon?
- Reviewed: Samantha Yeo [1]
Created by Aboutmovies (talk). Self nominated at 05:20, 16 November 2014 (UTC).
- Article is new enough, long enough, and has adequate references with no evidence of plagiarism; hook is appropriate length with in-line reference. However, hook source is from 2011 so present tense doesn't seem appropriate. While adding "as of" date would take care of this problem, I recommend alternate hook as follows:
- ALT: ... that the 30-member Oregon Mandolin Orchestra is modeled on the traditional mandolin orchestras that were popular in the United States during the 19th century?