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:*I question the ALT0 hook fact, which attributes the "first" to Chandak. The sources do not credit him alone; one says it was just his idea. (This should be fixed in the article.) Anyway, I like the ALT1 hook fact better, and I tweaked the wording. The ALT1 hook ref is verified and cited inline.
 
:*I question the ALT0 hook fact, which attributes the "first" to Chandak. The sources do not credit him alone; one says it was just his idea. (This should be fixed in the article.) Anyway, I like the ALT1 hook fact better, and I tweaked the wording. The ALT1 hook ref is verified and cited inline.
 
:*All in all, this is a rather rough start-class article. Are you able to find his CV to add details of his early life – his date of birth, birthplace, parents, etc – and fill out the infobox? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:01, 30 July 2017 (UTC)
 
:*All in all, this is a rather rough start-class article. Are you able to find his CV to add details of his early life – his date of birth, birthplace, parents, etc – and fill out the infobox? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:01, 30 July 2017 (UTC)
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::{{reply to|Yoninah}} Thank you. Your review is much appreciated. I'm on the case and yes I have a cv which I will use. Will message you back once done.[[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 07:37, 31 July 2017 (UTC)
 
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Pankaj Chandak

Created by Whispyhistory (talk). Nominated by Nick Moyes (talk) at 01:37, 29 May 2017 (UTC).

  • Lua error: expandTemplate: template "y" does not exist.
  • It is new enough; the article was created on May 22 and nominated exactly 7 days later on May 29. At 2837 characters, it is long enough.
  • The education section has serious issues. It is either unsourced or very weakly sourced. The only source in the section contains little biographical info. [1]
  • This sentence is unsourced: "Chandak has been involved in communicating science to broader audiences. This has included presenting live demonstrations for The BBCChannel 5British Science Festival2016 and London Open House." And there may be more sourcing issues.
  • Fails Earwig's Copyvio Detector —አቤል ዳዊት?(Janweh64) (talk) 04:05, 1 July 2017 (UTC)

Template:Reply to Thank you for reviewing. I appreciate your comments and will work on them as I feel this is a good hook and page. Time is a factor but will make effort to improve this section.Whispyhistory (talk) 07:09, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

Template:Ping The article creator (Template:Ping) has now addressed the concerns you flagged, and we believe it is good to go for a second review attempt. The high Earwig Copyvio return has been reduced to 39% - but it was always the use of numerous unchangeable award names, hospital names and technical terms which caused most of that to be flagged. I don't think it can be reduced any further. Sorry for the delay in responding; I've been encouraging and guiding a new editor through this process - and I'm sure we've gained a really great new contributor to Wikipedia as a result. Regards from the UK Nick Moyes (talk) 11:50, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg New reviewer needed to complete this review. Based on the earlier review, checking for copyvio and close paraphrasing should be included, along with standard sourcing and neutrality checks. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:22, 24 July 2017 (UTC) (updated 05:00, 25 July 2017 (UTC))
  • Symbol question.svg The close paraphrasing issue has been resolved. More copyediting is needed, however, to smooth out the prose into proper sentences in the first paragraph under Education and in the Awards section. It's unclear what the second entry under Selected Bibliography has to do with Chandak. Aren't there more book chapters/papers to list here?
  • I question the ALT0 hook fact, which attributes the "first" to Chandak. The sources do not credit him alone; one says it was just his idea. (This should be fixed in the article.) Anyway, I like the ALT1 hook fact better, and I tweaked the wording. The ALT1 hook ref is verified and cited inline.
  • All in all, this is a rather rough start-class article. Are you able to find his CV to add details of his early life – his date of birth, birthplace, parents, etc – and fill out the infobox? Yoninah (talk) 21:01, 30 July 2017 (UTC)
Template:Reply to Thank you. Your review is much appreciated. I'm on the case and yes I have a cv which I will use. Will message you back once done.Whispyhistory (talk) 07:37, 31 July 2017 (UTC)