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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 05:22, 28 April 2018 (UTC)<br />
 
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====Patrick Mayrhofer====
 
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* <s>... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to get a [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis]] that is controlled by his neural signals? to his nerve impulses?</s> <small>Sources: [https://www.meinbezirk.at/rohrbach/sport/mayrhofer-ist-behindertensportler-des-jahres-d1533244.html MeinBezirk.at]: "{{lang|de|Mayrhofer erhielt daraufhin als erster Mensch weltweit eine bionische Handprothese.}} [As a result, Mayrhofer was the first person worldwide to receive a bionic hand prosthesis.]", [http://www.dw.com/en/europes-first-bionic-hand-still-going-strong-a-year-on/a-15213846 Deutsche Welle]: "Austrian scientists pioneer a bionic hand powered by neural signals. The first man to get one says...", [http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-13273348 BBC]: "Last year, a 24-year-old Austrian named Patrick was the first patient in the world to choose to have his hand amputated, again by Professor Aszmann, and a bionic replacement fitted."</small>
 
* <s>... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to get a [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis]] that is controlled by his neural signals? to his nerve impulses?</s> <small>Sources: [https://www.meinbezirk.at/rohrbach/sport/mayrhofer-ist-behindertensportler-des-jahres-d1533244.html MeinBezirk.at]: "{{lang|de|Mayrhofer erhielt daraufhin als erster Mensch weltweit eine bionische Handprothese.}} [As a result, Mayrhofer was the first person worldwide to receive a bionic hand prosthesis.]", [http://www.dw.com/en/europes-first-bionic-hand-still-going-strong-a-year-on/a-15213846 Deutsche Welle]: "Austrian scientists pioneer a bionic hand powered by neural signals. The first man to get one says...", [http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-13273348 BBC]: "Last year, a 24-year-old Austrian named Patrick was the first patient in the world to choose to have his hand amputated, again by Professor Aszmann, and a bionic replacement fitted."</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the [[Austria at the 2018 Winter Paralympics|Austrian Paralympic team]] after seeing their stall at a [[prosthesis|prosthetics]] [[trade show]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.pyeongchang2018.com/en/game-time/results/PWG2018/en/snowboard/athlete-profile-n3047895-patrick-mayrhofer.htm PyeongChang2018.com]: "In 2012 he was at an exhibition about prosthetics where the Austrian Paralympic Committee had a booth. He talked to them and chose to pursue Para snowboard.", [https://www.ottobock.com/en/paralympics/athletes/patrick-mayrhofer/ Ottobock]: "Following rehabilitation, Mayrhofer visited a prosthetics trade show in 2012, where he came across a booth run by Austria’s para-sport team."</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the [[Austria at the 2018 Winter Paralympics|Austrian Paralympic team]] after seeing their stall at a [[prosthesis|prosthetics]] [[trade show]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.pyeongchang2018.com/en/game-time/results/PWG2018/en/snowboard/athlete-profile-n3047895-patrick-mayrhofer.htm PyeongChang2018.com]: "In 2012 he was at an exhibition about prosthetics where the Austrian Paralympic Committee had a booth. He talked to them and chose to pursue Para snowboard.", [https://www.ottobock.com/en/paralympics/athletes/patrick-mayrhofer/ Ottobock]: "Following rehabilitation, Mayrhofer visited a prosthetics trade show in 2012, where he came across a booth run by Austria’s para-sport team."</small>
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:* ''Reviewed'': <s>QPQ pending</s> [[Template:Did you know nominations/Alleged Libyan influence in the 2007 French elections|T:DYKN/Alleged Libyan influence in the 2007 French elections]] <small>(22:08, 23 April 2018 (UTC))</small>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': <s>QPQ pending</s> [[Template:Did you know nominations/Alleged Libyan influence in the 2007 French elections|T:DYKN/Alleged Libyan influence in the 2007 French elections]] <small>(22:08, 23 April 2018 (UTC))</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]] ([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]). Self-nominated at 22:37, 20 March 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]] ([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]). Self-nominated at 22:37, 20 March 2018 (UTC).</small>
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:::::*<s>'''ALT0b''': ... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to get a [[bionics|bionic]] hand [[prosthesis]] after an [[elective surgery|elective]] [[amputation]]?</s>
 
:::::*<s>'''ALT0b''': ... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to get a [[bionics|bionic]] hand [[prosthesis]] after an [[elective surgery|elective]] [[amputation]]?</s>
 
:::::*<s>'''ALT0c''': ... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to undergo [[elective surgery|elective]] [[amputation]] and get a [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis]]?</s>  
 
:::::*<s>'''ALT0c''': ... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to undergo [[elective surgery|elective]] [[amputation]] and get a [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis]]?</s>  
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:::::[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] We're going to need a third party to look over these now - may as well get that started while you work on the QPQ. [[user:violetriga|violet/riga]]&nbsp;<sub><sup>[[user talk:violetriga|[talk]]]</sup></sub> 21:35, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
 
 
--> We're going to need a third party to look over these now - may as well get that started while you work on the QPQ. [[user:violetriga|violet/riga]]&nbsp;<sub><sup>[[user talk:violetriga|[talk]]]</sup></sub> 21:35, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
 
 
:::::: {{Reply|violetriga|label1=violet/riga}} Oh, good spot; thank you. I definitely prefer ALT0a of those 3, as the neural signals part is just freaking cool. It could be worth adding a link to [[Neural engineering]] to ALT0a; ALT0b and ALT0c could link to [[Elective surgery]] and [[Amputation]]. I've completed the QPQ now, [[Template:Did you know nominations/Alleged Libyan influence in the 2007 French elections|here]]. Thanks again! — <span class="vcard"><span class="fn">[[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]]</span> <small>([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]; please &#123;&#123;[[Template:ping|ping]]&#125;&#125; me in replies)</small></span> 22:08, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
 
:::::: {{Reply|violetriga|label1=violet/riga}} Oh, good spot; thank you. I definitely prefer ALT0a of those 3, as the neural signals part is just freaking cool. It could be worth adding a link to [[Neural engineering]] to ALT0a; ALT0b and ALT0c could link to [[Elective surgery]] and [[Amputation]]. I've completed the QPQ now, [[Template:Did you know nominations/Alleged Libyan influence in the 2007 French elections|here]]. Thanks again! — <span class="vcard"><span class="fn">[[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]]</span> <small>([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]; please &#123;&#123;[[Template:ping|ping]]&#125;&#125; me in replies)</small></span> 22:08, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
 
:::::::Updates made to review and ALT0s. [[user:violetriga|violet/riga]]&nbsp;<sub><sup>[[user talk:violetriga|[talk]]]</sup></sub> 07:20, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
 
:::::::Updates made to review and ALT0s. [[user:violetriga|violet/riga]]&nbsp;<sub><sup>[[user talk:violetriga|[talk]]]</sup></sub> 07:20, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I agree with Violetriga that ALT0a is the most interesting. The hook is cited inline and verified in the source. Rest of the review per Violetriga, so this should be good to go. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 09:59, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I agree with Violetriga that ALT0a is the most interesting. The hook is cited inline and verified in the source. Rest of the review per Violetriga, so this should be good to go. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 09:59, 26 April 2018 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Latest revision as of 05:22, 28 April 2018

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:22, 28 April 2018 (UTC)

Patrick Mayrhofer

Created by OwenBlacker (talk). Self-nominated at 22:37, 20 March 2018 (UTC).

  • Review:

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Template:Ping - are you planning to complete this nomination? violet/riga [talk] 07:40, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
Template:Reply Sorry about that; I'd completely forgotten that I still had the QPQ outstanding and hadn't spotted that you had replied. Thanks for having {{ping}}ed me to bring it to my attention — I'll take a look over the weekend and {{ping}} you back. Thanks again! — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 09:23, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
PS: I've never seen that use of <sub><sup> to make smaller middle-aligned text before. Nice effect! 😊
Template:Reply I've tweaked the wording there — the change of "neural signals" to "nerve impulses" was me trying to simplify the wording of the hook. Is that better? (I'll go find one to QPQ now.) — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 20:34, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
Template:Reply Okay that works better. Delving into this a little further I'm not fully sure of the hook's claim. Examining the sources does not backup the claim "...first person in the world to get a bionic prosthesis that is controlled by his neural signals":
  • Article: "first patient in the world to undergo elective amputation and receive a bionic prosthesis"
  • MB: "first person worldwide to receive a bionic hand prosthesis"
  • DW: "Europe's first bionic hand" & "...a bionic hand powered by neural signals. The first man to get one..."
  • BBC: "Patrick was the first patient in the world to choose to have his hand amputated"
I therefore suggest the following ALT hooks:
Symbol redirect vote 4.svg We're going to need a third party to look over these now - may as well get that started while you work on the QPQ. violet/riga [talk] 21:35, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
Template:Reply Oh, good spot; thank you. I definitely prefer ALT0a of those 3, as the neural signals part is just freaking cool. It could be worth adding a link to Neural engineering to ALT0a; ALT0b and ALT0c could link to Elective surgery and Amputation. I've completed the QPQ now, here. Thanks again! — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 22:08, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
Updates made to review and ALT0s. violet/riga [talk] 07:20, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg I agree with Violetriga that ALT0a is the most interesting. The hook is cited inline and verified in the source. Rest of the review per Violetriga, so this should be good to go. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 09:59, 26 April 2018 (UTC)