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| − | | | + | The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:The Squirrel Conspiracy|The Squirrel Conspiracy]] ([[User talk:The Squirrel Conspiracy|talk]]) 06:37, 23 May 2020 (UTC)<br /> |
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* <s>... that producer '''[[Paul F. Heard]]''' believed that techniques used in government [[propaganda film]]s could be used in [[List of religious films|religious films]] to bring about "spiritual realizations"? </s> <small>Source: "He believed 'similar techniques' could be used to address contemporary problems requiring 'spiritual realizations'". ([https://books.google.co.il/books?id=YZ9QI-t7TwUC&pg=PA114&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false ''Reforming Hollywood''])</small> | * <s>... that producer '''[[Paul F. Heard]]''' believed that techniques used in government [[propaganda film]]s could be used in [[List of religious films|religious films]] to bring about "spiritual realizations"? </s> <small>Source: "He believed 'similar techniques' could be used to address contemporary problems requiring 'spiritual realizations'". ([https://books.google.co.il/books?id=YZ9QI-t7TwUC&pg=PA114&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false ''Reforming Hollywood''])</small> | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Tubby Schmalz]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Tubby Schmalz]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:28, 5 May 2020 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:28, 5 May 2020 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough. QPQ done. Paraphrasing is fine. Exceptionally well-researched and fully-cited; I was going to make the minor comment that I had to take [https://www.history.pcusa.org/collections/research-tools/guides-archival-collections/ncc-rg-16 this page] on AGF as a RS for the PFC-to-BFC merger under [[WP:PUBLISHED]], but then [https://www.newspapers.com/clip/49904836/the-los-angeles-times/ the clipping] at the end of the sentence confirmed it. Neutral and clear throughout. | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough. QPQ done. Paraphrasing is fine. Exceptionally well-researched and fully-cited; I was going to make the minor comment that I had to take [https://www.history.pcusa.org/collections/research-tools/guides-archival-collections/ncc-rg-16 this page] on AGF as a RS for the PFC-to-BFC merger under [[WP:PUBLISHED]], but then [https://www.newspapers.com/clip/49904836/the-los-angeles-times/ the clipping] at the end of the sentence confirmed it. Neutral and clear throughout. | ||
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:::*Thanks for the review. Sure, your suggestion is fine, but "applying a technique" sounds a little strange. How about "employing a technique"? | :::*Thanks for the review. Sure, your suggestion is fine, but "applying a technique" sounds a little strange. How about "employing a technique"? | ||
:::*'''ALT1''': ... that producer '''[[Paul F. Heard]]''' believed that techniques used in government [[propaganda film]]s could be employed in [[List of religious films|religious films]] to bring about "spiritual realizations"? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:21, 22 May 2020 (UTC) | :::*'''ALT1''': ... that producer '''[[Paul F. Heard]]''' believed that techniques used in government [[propaganda film]]s could be employed in [[List of religious films|religious films]] to bring about "spiritual realizations"? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:21, 22 May 2020 (UTC) | ||
| − | ::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Sounds good! [[User:FourViolas|FourViolas]] ([[User talk:FourViolas|talk]]) 15:46, 22 May 2020 (UTC) | + | ::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Sounds good! [[User:FourViolas|FourViolas]] ([[User talk:FourViolas|talk]]) 15:46, 22 May 2020 (UTC)</div><includeonly>|}}</includeonly><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> |
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Latest revision as of 06:37, 23 May 2020
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 06:37, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
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Paul F. Heard
... that producer Paul F. Heard believed that techniques used in government propaganda films could be used in religious films to bring about "spiritual realizations"?Source: "He believed 'similar techniques' could be used to address contemporary problems requiring 'spiritual realizations'". (Reforming Hollywood)
Created by Yoninah (talk). Self-nominated at 20:28, 5 May 2020 (UTC).
New enough, long enough. QPQ done. Paraphrasing is fine. Exceptionally well-researched and fully-cited; I was going to make the minor comment that I had to take this page on AGF as a RS for the PFC-to-BFC merger under WP:PUBLISHED, but then the clipping at the end of the sentence confirmed it. Neutral and clear throughout.
- Hook is under the length limit and interesting to a general public. It's reasonably neutral, although it comes off as a little conspiratorial out of context. I hate to be perfectionist, but is there a chance you'd like to change the second "used in" to "applied to", the way it is in the article? FourViolas (talk) 01:33, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Sure, your suggestion is fine, but "applying a technique" sounds a little strange. How about "employing a technique"?
- ALT1: ... that producer Paul F. Heard believed that techniques used in government propaganda films could be employed in religious films to bring about "spiritual realizations"? Yoninah (talk) 14:21, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
Sounds good! FourViolas (talk) 15:46, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
- Hook is under the length limit and interesting to a general public. It's reasonably neutral, although it comes off as a little conspiratorial out of context. I hate to be perfectionist, but is there a chance you'd like to change the second "used in" to "applied to", the way it is in the article? FourViolas (talk) 01:33, 22 May 2020 (UTC)