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:*{{re|KAVEBEAR}} So far, so good. In ALT2, though, you spelled "assembly" wrong. Otherwise, it's interesting that someone was president ''during'' two kings' elections. A monarchy and presidency is not very common, so they're interesting. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius -]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 17:12, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
 
:*{{re|KAVEBEAR}} So far, so good. In ALT2, though, you spelled "assembly" wrong. Otherwise, it's interesting that someone was president ''during'' two kings' elections. A monarchy and presidency is not very common, so they're interesting. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius -]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 17:12, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
 
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::* This is all good, except: do you want readers to know that he is specifically the president of Hawaii's Legislative assembly during this time, or do you want to keep this as an element of surprise? [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius -]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 17:23, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 17:23, 28 October 2016

Paul Nahaolelua

Paul Nahaolelua
Paul Nahaolelua

Source: Dabagh, Jean, ed. (1974). "A King is Elected: One Hundred Years Ago". The Hawaiian Journal of History. Honolulu: Hawaiian Historical Society. 8: 76–89. hdl:10524/112. OCLC 60626541.; Hawaii (1918). Lydecker, Robert Colfax (ed.). Roster Legislatures of Hawaii, 1841–1918. Honolulu: Hawaiian Gazette Company. pp. 124, 127. OCLC 60737418.; Kuykendall, Ralph Simpson (1967). The Hawaiian Kingdom 1874–1893, The Kalakaua Dynasty. 3. Honolulu: University of Hawaii Press. pp. 3–16. ISBN 978-0-87022-433-1. OCLC 500374815.

  • Reviewed: Tennant Creek Catholic Church
  • Comment: URGENTLY ASKING SOMEONE TO REVIEW THIS BEFORE NOVEMBER!!! If there is any possibility this can become a hook for US Election Day (November 8), I would prefer the first two hooks?

Created by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 10:00, 28 October 2016 (UTC).

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  • Template:Re So far, so good. In ALT2, though, you spelled "assembly" wrong. Otherwise, it's interesting that someone was president during two kings' elections. A monarchy and presidency is not very common, so they're interesting. epicgenius - (talk) 17:12, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
  • This is all good, except: do you want readers to know that he is specifically the president of Hawaii's Legislative assembly during this time, or do you want to keep this as an element of surprise? epicgenius - (talk) 17:23, 28 October 2016 (UTC)