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| − | * ... that '''[[Paul Nahaolelua]]''' ''(pictured)'' was president during the elections of two [[List of monarchs of Hawaii| | + | * ... that '''[[Paul Nahaolelua]]''' ''(pictured)'' was president during the elections of two [[List of monarchs of Hawaii|kings of Hawaii]]? |
* '''ALT 1''' <s>... that '''[[Paul Nahaolelua]]''' ''(pictured)'' was president during the elections of 1873 and 1874?</s> | * '''ALT 1''' <s>... that '''[[Paul Nahaolelua]]''' ''(pictured)'' was president during the elections of 1873 and 1874?</s> | ||
* '''ALT 2''' <s>... that '''[[Paul Nahaolelua]]''' ''(pictured)'' presided as president of the [[Legislature of the Kingdom of Hawaii|Legislative Assembly]] during the elections of two [[List of monarchs of Hawaii|Hawaiian monarchs]]?</s> | * '''ALT 2''' <s>... that '''[[Paul Nahaolelua]]''' ''(pictured)'' presided as president of the [[Legislature of the Kingdom of Hawaii|Legislative Assembly]] during the elections of two [[List of monarchs of Hawaii|Hawaiian monarchs]]?</s> | ||
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Paul Nahaolelua
- ... that Paul Nahaolelua (pictured) was president during the elections of two kings of Hawaii?
- ALT 1
... that Paul Nahaolelua (pictured) was president during the elections of 1873 and 1874? - ALT 2
... that Paul Nahaolelua (pictured) presided as president of the Legislative Assembly during the elections of two Hawaiian monarchs?
Source: Dabagh, Jean, ed. (1974). "A King is Elected: One Hundred Years Ago". The Hawaiian Journal of History. Honolulu: Hawaiian Historical Society. 8: 76–89. hdl:10524/112. OCLC 60626541.; Hawaii (1918). Lydecker, Robert Colfax (ed.). Roster Legislatures of Hawaii, 1841–1918. Honolulu: Hawaiian Gazette Company. pp. 124, 127. OCLC 60737418.; Kuykendall, Ralph Simpson (1967). The Hawaiian Kingdom 1874–1893, The Kalakaua Dynasty. 3. Honolulu: University of Hawaii Press. pp. 3–16. ISBN 978-0-87022-433-1. OCLC 500374815.
- Reviewed: Tennant Creek Catholic Church
- Comment: If this can become a hook for US Election Day (November 8), I would prefer the first two hooks?
Created by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 10:00, 28 October 2016 (UTC).
- I'll review this article. epicgenius - (talk) 17:12, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
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- Template:Re So far, so good. In ALT2, though, you spelled "assembly" wrong. Otherwise, it's interesting that someone was president during two kings' elections. A monarchy and presidency is not very common, so they're interesting. epicgenius - (talk) 17:12, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
- This is all good, except: do you want readers to know that he is specifically the president of Hawaii's Legislative assembly during this time, or do you want to keep this as an element of surprise? epicgenius - (talk) 17:23, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
- Template:Ping I wanted to keep it simply president for an element of surprise especially if the hook can be on the main page on Election Day. KAVEBEAR (talk) 18:01, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
- Then the first hook (Template:Tq) is good to go. It's the most interesting and concise. epicgenius - (talk) 18:19, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
