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The result was: '''withdrawn by nominator''', closed by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]])&nbsp;18:25, 28 September 2020 (UTC)<br />
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Nominator [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Noahfgodard&diff=980829244&oldid=980828915 requested closure of this nomination]
 
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* <s>... that Danish-Australian landscape gardener '''[[Paul Sorensen (landscape gardener)|Paul Sorensen]]''' built over 100 gardens during his career?</s>  <small>Source: "...he built over 100 gardens during his career." [https://www.gardenhistorysociety.org.au/wp-content/uploads/2017/06/2008-Conference-Papers.pdf]</small>
 
* <s>... that Danish-Australian landscape gardener '''[[Paul Sorensen (landscape gardener)|Paul Sorensen]]''' built over 100 gardens during his career?</s>  <small>Source: "...he built over 100 gardens during his career." [https://www.gardenhistorysociety.org.au/wp-content/uploads/2017/06/2008-Conference-Papers.pdf]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that Danish-Australian landscape gardener '''[[Paul Sorensen (landscape gardener)|Paul Sorensen]]''' developed techniques to <s>improve</s>enhance the sandy soil of Australia's [[Blue Mountains (New South Wales)|Blue Mountains]], so that gardens could be built there? <small>Source: "Sorensen developed techniques for improving the sandy soils of the Blue Mountains, so that these soils could support luxuriant gardens." [http://adb.anu.edu.au/biography/sorensen-paul-edwin-bielenberg-15730]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that Danish-Australian landscape gardener '''[[Paul Sorensen (landscape gardener)|Paul Sorensen]]''' developed techniques to <s>improve</s>enhance the sandy soil of Australia's [[Blue Mountains (New South Wales)|Blue Mountains]], so that gardens could be built there? <small>Source: "Sorensen developed techniques for improving the sandy soils of the Blue Mountains, so that these soils could support luxuriant gardens." [http://adb.anu.edu.au/biography/sorensen-paul-edwin-bielenberg-15730]</small>
 
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<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Noahfgodard|Noahfgodard]] ([[User talk:Noahfgodard|talk]]). Self-nominated at 21:39, 1 September 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Noahfgodard|Noahfgodard]] ([[User talk:Noahfgodard|talk]]). Self-nominated at 21:39, 1 September 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:* '''Comment''' I moved this article to mainspace, as stated above, but I was not the author. The article was written almost entirely by [[User:TrimmerinWiki|TrimmerinWiki]] ([[User talk:TrimmerinWiki|talk]]). Does anyone know if there's a way to credit them in the nomination? [[User:Noahfgodard|Noahfgodard]] ([[User talk:Noahfgodard|talk]]) 21:46, 1 September 2020 (UTC)
 
:* '''Comment''' I moved this article to mainspace, as stated above, but I was not the author. The article was written almost entirely by [[User:TrimmerinWiki|TrimmerinWiki]] ([[User talk:TrimmerinWiki|talk]]). Does anyone know if there's a way to credit them in the nomination? [[User:Noahfgodard|Noahfgodard]] ([[User talk:Noahfgodard|talk]]) 21:46, 1 September 2020 (UTC)
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::::*: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Sorry, I somehow overlooked ALT1, which isn't perfect but better than ALT2, I think. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 08:04, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
 
::::*: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Sorry, I somehow overlooked ALT1, which isn't perfect but better than ALT2, I think. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 08:04, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote this, but I don't see the hook fact in the inline cite provided in the article (footnote 1). I also changed "improved" to "enhanced" if indeed this close paraphrasing exists in the source. Perhaps "enriched" could also work. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:33, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote this, but I don't see the hook fact in the inline cite provided in the article (footnote 1). I also changed "improved" to "enhanced" if indeed this close paraphrasing exists in the source. Perhaps "enriched" could also work. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:33, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
::::::*: [[User:Noahfgodard|Noahfgodard]], how is [http://bluemountainsheritage.com.au/wp-content/uploads/2018/11/03_HeritagenewsletterIss.3May-June20093.pdf this source] about his improvements, specifically at Everglades, - and could we perhaps make a hook around that place if he's known for it? ... instead of so general? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 11:54, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
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::::::*: [[User:Noahfgodard|Noahfgodard]], how is [http://bluemountainsheritage.com.au/wp-content/uploads/2018/11/03_HeritagenewsletterIss.3May-June20093.pdf this source] about his improvements, specifically at Everglades, - and could we perhaps make a hook around that place if he's known for it? ... instead of so general? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 11:54, 14 September 2020 (UTC)</div><includeonly>|}}</includeonly><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
 
 
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Latest revision as of 18:26, 28 September 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Yoninah (talk) 18:25, 28 September 2020 (UTC)
Nominator requested closure of this nomination

Paul Sorensen (landscape gardener)

  • ... that Danish-Australian landscape gardener Paul Sorensen built over 100 gardens during his career? Source: "...he built over 100 gardens during his career." [1]
    • ALT1:... that Danish-Australian landscape gardener Paul Sorensen developed techniques to improveenhance the sandy soil of Australia's Blue Mountains, so that gardens could be built there? Source: "Sorensen developed techniques for improving the sandy soils of the Blue Mountains, so that these soils could support luxuriant gardens." [2]

Moved to mainspace by Noahfgodard (talk). Self-nominated at 21:39, 1 September 2020 (UTC).

  • Comment I moved this article to mainspace, as stated above, but I was not the author. The article was written almost entirely by TrimmerinWiki (talk). Does anyone know if there's a way to credit them in the nomination? Noahfgodard (talk) 21:46, 1 September 2020 (UTC)
I've added a credit for them inside the commented credits part. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 07:16, 2 September 2020 (UTC)
Symbol question.svg Interesting detailed article on fine sources, no copyvio obvious. Sorry, with all that rich material, I find the hook plain boring. Anything that he did and nobody else? Using Australian features? Vistas? - How about an image and make a hook around it? I'd appreciate a bit more lead, and/or an infobox, best both ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:06, 5 September 2020 (UTC)
I left a note for the nominator on his talk page. Yoninah (talk) 12:58, 13 September 2020 (UTC)
Template:Re Maybe something about his immigration to Australia?
  • ALT2: ... that following the outbreak of the First World War, landscape gardener Paul Sorensen emmigrated from his native Denmark to Australia, living there until his death in 1983? Source: "Sorensen was later to state that it was the outbreak of the First World War (although his homeland Denmark was neutral) that motivated him to migrate to Australia..." "
    Symbol confirmed.svg Sorry, I somehow overlooked ALT1, which isn't perfect but better than ALT2, I think. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:04, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this, but I don't see the hook fact in the inline cite provided in the article (footnote 1). I also changed "improved" to "enhanced" if indeed this close paraphrasing exists in the source. Perhaps "enriched" could also work. Yoninah (talk) 11:33, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
    Noahfgodard, how is this source about his improvements, specifically at Everglades, - and could we perhaps make a hook around that place if he's known for it? ... instead of so general? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:54, 14 September 2020 (UTC)