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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough. New enough. Well cited (AGF in Polish). Good prose. (I've made a few minor copy-edits.) Just one thing: Can you double-check the following? "By the end of the 1930s the Fabryka Karabinów was one of the largest arms producers of Poland, with production capabilities far exceeding potential orders from the army. For example in 1938 the company's CEO estimated that the factory could produce 600 pieces of Browning wz.1928 LMG, while the total orders for that year amounted to only 900 pieces." The second sentence contradicts the first. [[User:Hybernator|Hybernator]] ([[User talk:Hybernator|talk]]) 21:50, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough. New enough. Well cited (AGF in Polish). Good prose. (I've made a few minor copy-edits.) Just one thing: Can you double-check the following? "By the end of the 1930s the Fabryka Karabinów was one of the largest arms producers of Poland, with production capabilities far exceeding potential orders from the army. For example in 1938 the company's CEO estimated that the factory could produce 600 pieces of Browning wz.1928 LMG, while the total orders for that year amounted to only 900 pieces." The second sentence contradicts the first. [[User:Hybernator|Hybernator]] ([[User talk:Hybernator|talk]]) 21:50, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
 
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::[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Pa%C5%84stwowa_Fabryka_Karabin%C3%B3w&diff=570236117&oldid=570179657 Done]. Good spotting :) ''<font color="#901">//</font>''[[User:Halibutt|Halibu]][[User talk:Halibutt|tt]] 08:24, 26 August 2013 (UTC)
 
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Państwowa Fabryka Karabinów

Created by Halibutt (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 14:51, 13 August 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Long enough. New enough. Well cited (AGF in Polish). Good prose. (I've made a few minor copy-edits.) Just one thing: Can you double-check the following? "By the end of the 1930s the Fabryka Karabinów was one of the largest arms producers of Poland, with production capabilities far exceeding potential orders from the army. For example in 1938 the company's CEO estimated that the factory could produce 600 pieces of Browning wz.1928 LMG, while the total orders for that year amounted to only 900 pieces." The second sentence contradicts the first. Hybernator (talk) 21:50, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
Done. Good spotting :) //Halibutt 08:24, 26 August 2013 (UTC)