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:* [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Article is new and long enough, and an interesting read to boot. I don't understand Danish, so AGFing on sources, including the ones for the hook (which though, after reading the article, doesn't seem to be a controversial claim). I have added a couple of {{t1|clarify}} tags to the article but these are essentially grammatical issues that can be easily handled. Another suggestion is to format the references using standard citation templates, and complete the bibliographical informaton for a couple of references (eg the Den Store Danske Encyklopædi). But none of these issues should hold back the DYK.
 
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::Recommend minor grammatical alteration to the hook by replacing "contributed to establishing" by "helped establish", which rolls easier off the tongue IMO. [[User:Abecedare|Abecedare]] ([[User talk:Abecedare|talk]]) 01:26, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
 
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Peder Syv

Created by Maunus (talk). Self-nominated at 01:14, 11 May 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol voting keep.svg Article is new and long enough, and an interesting read to boot. I don't understand Danish, so AGFing on sources, including the ones for the hook (which though, after reading the article, doesn't seem to be a controversial claim). I have added a couple of Template:T1 tags to the article but these are essentially grammatical issues that can be easily handled. Another suggestion is to format the references using standard citation templates, and complete the bibliographical informaton for a couple of references (eg the Den Store Danske Encyklopædi). But none of these issues should hold back the DYK.
Recommend minor grammatical alteration to the hook by replacing "contributed to establishing" by "helped establish", which rolls easier off the tongue IMO. Abecedare (talk) 01:26, 17 May 2015 (UTC)