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:* '''ALT1''':... that Mabel Bauer  became the first woman to conduct the [[West Point Band]] during '''[[Philip Egner|a 1932 performance]]''' of a [[Franz von Blon]] composition? [[User:Moriori|Moriori]] ([[User talk:Moriori|talk]]) 23:44, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
 
:* '''ALT1''':... that Mabel Bauer  became the first woman to conduct the [[West Point Band]] during '''[[Philip Egner|a 1932 performance]]''' of a [[Franz von Blon]] composition? [[User:Moriori|Moriori]] ([[User talk:Moriori|talk]]) 23:44, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
 
:::'''Endorse''' [[User:Moriori|Moriori]]'s ALT1, strike the primary hook. [[User:LavaBaron|LavaBaron]] ([[User talk:LavaBaron|talk]]) 00:52, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
 
:::'''Endorse''' [[User:Moriori|Moriori]]'s ALT1, strike the primary hook. [[User:LavaBaron|LavaBaron]] ([[User talk:LavaBaron|talk]]) 00:52, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and my spot checks did not bring up any copyright issues. However, I do not like either of the hooks, because they give no indication that the article is the biography of someone. Why not use the [[On, Brave Old Army Team]] connection, or if you prefer the woman conductor angle, at least mention Egner's name in the hook. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 06:30, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
  
 
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Philip Egner

Created by LavaBaron (talk). Self-nominated at 19:24, 14 May 2016 (UTC).

Endorse Moriori's ALT1, strike the primary hook. LavaBaron (talk) 00:52, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and my spot checks did not bring up any copyright issues. However, I do not like either of the hooks, because they give no indication that the article is the biography of someone. Why not use the On, Brave Old Army Team connection, or if you prefer the woman conductor angle, at least mention Egner's name in the hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:30, 25 May 2016 (UTC)