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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:26, 19 June 2016 (UTC)<br />
 
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* <del>... that the first time in history that a woman directed the [[West Point Band]] was during '''[[Philip Egner|a 1932 performance]]''' of a [[Franz von Blon]] composition?</del>
 
* <del>... that the first time in history that a woman directed the [[West Point Band]] was during '''[[Philip Egner|a 1932 performance]]''' of a [[Franz von Blon]] composition?</del>
  
 
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<small>Created by [[User:LavaBaron|LavaBaron]] ([[User talk:LavaBaron|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:24, 14 May 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:LavaBaron|LavaBaron]] ([[User talk:LavaBaron|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:24, 14 May 2016 (UTC).</small>
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:* '''ALT1''':... that Mabel Bauer  became the first woman to conduct the [[West Point Band]] during '''[[Philip Egner|a 1932 performance]]''' of a [[Franz von Blon]] composition? [[User:Moriori|Moriori]] ([[User talk:Moriori|talk]]) 23:44, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
 
:* '''ALT1''':... that Mabel Bauer  became the first woman to conduct the [[West Point Band]] during '''[[Philip Egner|a 1932 performance]]''' of a [[Franz von Blon]] composition? [[User:Moriori|Moriori]] ([[User talk:Moriori|talk]]) 23:44, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
 
:::'''Endorse''' [[User:Moriori|Moriori]]'s ALT1, strike the primary hook. [[User:LavaBaron|LavaBaron]] ([[User talk:LavaBaron|talk]]) 00:52, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
 
:::'''Endorse''' [[User:Moriori|Moriori]]'s ALT1, strike the primary hook. [[User:LavaBaron|LavaBaron]] ([[User talk:LavaBaron|talk]]) 00:52, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
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::* '''ALT2b''':... that '''[[Philip Egner]]''' began composing "[[On, Brave Old Army Team]]", the [[fight song]] of the [[U.S. Military Academy at West Point]], by scribbling notes on his shirt? --[[User:PFHLai|PFHLai]] ([[User talk:PFHLai|talk]]) 18:46, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
 
::* '''ALT2b''':... that '''[[Philip Egner]]''' began composing "[[On, Brave Old Army Team]]", the [[fight song]] of the [[U.S. Military Academy at West Point]], by scribbling notes on his shirt? --[[User:PFHLai|PFHLai]] ([[User talk:PFHLai|talk]]) 18:46, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
  
[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, no close paraphrasing, neutral, sourced. Hook: for reasons given by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] eiter ALT2a or ALT2b work best, short enough, sourced. GTG. [[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]) 19:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 20:29, 19 June 2016

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:26, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Philip Egner

Created by LavaBaron (talk). Self-nominated at 19:24, 14 May 2016 (UTC).

Endorse Moriori's ALT1, strike the primary hook. LavaBaron (talk) 00:52, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and my spot checks did not bring up any copyright issues. However, I do not like either of the hooks, because they give no indication that the article is the biography of someone. Why not use the On, Brave Old Army Team connection, or if you prefer the woman conductor angle, at least mention Egner's name in the hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:30, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg New enough, long enough, no close paraphrasing, neutral, sourced. Hook: for reasons given by Cwmhiraeth eiter ALT2a or ALT2b work best, short enough, sourced. GTG. Aymatth2 (talk) 19:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)