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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline to a reliable source, the article is neutral and I detected no close-paraphrasing issues. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 05:19, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline to a reliable source, the article is neutral and I detected no close-paraphrasing issues. The original hook is better because in ALT1, the word "led" implies he was the captain, and it does not say this in the article. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 05:19, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 05:27, 18 August 2015

Pio Matos

Created by TempleM (talk). Self-nominated at 16:12, 4 August 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline to a reliable source, the article is neutral and I detected no close-paraphrasing issues. The original hook is better because in ALT1, the word "led" implies he was the captain, and it does not say this in the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:19, 18 August 2015 (UTC)