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:I'll keep an eye on the article for any relevant changes. [[User:I JethroBT|<font color="green" face="Candara"><b>I, JethroBT</b></font>]][[User talk:I JethroBT| <sup>drop me a line</sup>]] 22:56, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 
:I'll keep an eye on the article for any relevant changes. [[User:I JethroBT|<font color="green" face="Candara"><b>I, JethroBT</b></font>]][[User talk:I JethroBT| <sup>drop me a line</sup>]] 22:56, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 
::Thanks, but the specific comments on the passages you quote aren't really DYK issues, & I suggest you move them to the article talk page. I have done the first so far, but as I left working off on the article a month ago, my memory of the many sources used is not great. Equally you haven't adressed several basic DYK criteria like length, newness etc. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 14:42, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
 
::Thanks, but the specific comments on the passages you quote aren't really DYK issues, & I suggest you move them to the article talk page. I have done the first so far, but as I left working off on the article a month ago, my memory of the many sources used is not great. Equally you haven't adressed several basic DYK criteria like length, newness etc. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 14:42, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
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:::[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Given that I can't personally verify anything in the text (and therefore can't check for copvio or close paraphrasing), I didn't think it was too much to ask you to verify a few claims that are not clearly cited.  But, given that these aren't central to the hook, maybe I am asking for too much.  As for the rest of the criteria, article was created 18 September 2010; expansion (over 5x) began on 27 July 2013 and finished August 1.  Prose is clearly over the 1500 characters.  QPQ checks out. [[User:I JethroBT|<font color="green" face="Candara"><b>I, JethroBT</b></font>]][[User talk:I JethroBT| <sup>drop me a line</sup>]] 18:17, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 18:17, 1 September 2013

Powder flask

Indian carved ivory powder flask

Created/expanded by Johnbod (talk). Self nominated at 18:03, 1 August 2013 (UTC).

  • (Comment by nominator) The You Tube bit I think falls short of an assertion. In the article it is referenced only by two example You Tube videos (how not to do it, kids). There seems to a be a correlation with not wearing a shirt when making your video and this practice. Johnbod (talk) 10:09, 2 August 2013 (UTC)
16px (edit conflict) The hook is interesting, and I think ties in well with the warning presented in reliable sources. I'm willing to AGF verifiability concerns on the basis of your content creation. However, some claims here are not clearly verified to me based on the sources present, namely:
Under "Use":
Done that. Johnbod (talk) 14:42, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
Under "Decoration"
I'll keep an eye on the article for any relevant changes. I, JethroBT drop me a line 22:56, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
Thanks, but the specific comments on the passages you quote aren't really DYK issues, & I suggest you move them to the article talk page. I have done the first so far, but as I left working off on the article a month ago, my memory of the many sources used is not great. Equally you haven't adressed several basic DYK criteria like length, newness etc. Johnbod (talk) 14:42, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
16px Given that I can't personally verify anything in the text (and therefore can't check for copvio or close paraphrasing), I didn't think it was too much to ask you to verify a few claims that are not clearly cited. But, given that these aren't central to the hook, maybe I am asking for too much. As for the rest of the criteria, article was created 18 September 2010; expansion (over 5x) began on 27 July 2013 and finished August 1. Prose is clearly over the 1500 characters. QPQ checks out. I, JethroBT drop me a line 18:17, 1 September 2013 (UTC)