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::*'''ALT1'''... that American aid workers [[Heather Mercer]] and [[Dayna Curry]]'s memoir, '''''[[Prisoners of Hope]]''''', recounts them killing 150 flies a day during their 2001 imprisonment by the Taliban? | ::*'''ALT1'''... that American aid workers [[Heather Mercer]] and [[Dayna Curry]]'s memoir, '''''[[Prisoners of Hope]]''''', recounts them killing 150 flies a day during their 2001 imprisonment by the Taliban? | ||
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| + | :::Thanks for the review! I agree with you about the wording; the second version is better. --[[User:1ST7|1ST7]] ([[User talk:1ST7|talk]]) 00:10, 28 August 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Prisoners of Hope
- ... that American aid workers Heather Mercer and Dayna Curry's memoir, Prisoners of Hope, recounts that during their 2001 imprisonment by the Taliban, the prison cells were so infested with flies that they killed around 150 every day?
Created by 1ST7 (talk). Self nominated at 05:21, 27 August 2013 (UTC).
Long enough, new enough. Found no plagiarism. Good work. But the hook is on the long side, and would suggest cutting it a bit; see below. Drmies (talk) 17:58, 27 August 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1... that American aid workers Heather Mercer and Dayna Curry's memoir, Prisoners of Hope, recounts them killing 150 flies a day during their 2001 imprisonment by the Taliban?